PAC Request Axiom's Lore and Pac Request

Tagging threads containing character bios which request approval for in-game PAC designs relating to the description of the character.
Pac Requesting Approval, Yes

PAC Requested (Which job):A-1 officer
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:48485243
Character Bio:
Captain Axiom is the █████ - █ officer assigned to Site-65 following the extraction of Captain Hydra. Formerly stationed at Site-O1, Axiom is known for rigid procedural enforcement, emotional detachment, and uncompromising loyalty to the ██ -███████.

Where Hydra identified threats through perception and pressure, Axiom enforces stability through doctrine and control. His presence signals consolidation, compliance, and the end of tolerated deviation.

Axiom does not investigate whether a system is flawed.
He ensures it functions — or replaces it.


Photograph of PAC:
https://media.discordapp.net/attach...35ee9549&=&format=webp&width=1985&height=1116
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My support to this ████████ is ████████ because I cannot ████ the ██████ in the ████████.

Truly yours,
- ██████████████████


(Ok fr. How is staff meant to judge if this lore background is passable when they cannot read the damn thing lmao-)
 
But uh… what’s with all the redactions. Quite literally can’t decipher or judge your lore based on these redactions. A personell file especially in AO is already redacted to your respective REGCOM and FCOM already, it just wouldn’t be this redacted

It is a nice pac however.
 
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Axiom said:
Classified stuff, IC only select sr cl4’s know more of my background and past operations though only site command know the full extent.
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so write it from a Site Command perspective who get to see the full story, especially since most of these details don't need redacted with or without authorisation.

'Clank' said:
But uh… what’s with all the redactions. Quite literally can’t decipher or judge your lore based on these redactions. A personell file especially in AO is already redacted to your respective REGCOM and FCOM already, it just wouldn’t be this redacted

It is a nice pac however.
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-Support on the lore, pac3 is vibing but goodness.

Edit: can't believe I missed this.
" █████ most unique attribute is his ability to induce fear in his enemies by his presence and gaze. He has a rare genetic mutation designated ████ ██ ███ ████████ He somehow was born with that mutation because of having a Unique Dna Cell and a very rare type of blood designated █████████ ████ which he got from a Quote "Natural ███████" "

walking proof that redactions distract from the actual writing, didn't even notice this entirely.
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'Clank' said:
But uh… what’s with all the redactions. Quite literally can’t decipher or judge your lore based on these redactions. A personell file especially in AO is already redacted to your respective REGCOM and FCOM already, it just wouldn’t be this redacted

It is a nice pac however.
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Thank you for the feedback,And yeah that’s true, I’ll post my personnel file version which is much more detailed / story rich also which doesn’t have the same amount of exaggerated redacted bars in it when i get home. (Still at work)
 
Axiom said:
Thank you for the feedback,And yeah that’s true, I’ll post my personnel file version which is much more detailed / story rich also which doesn’t have the same amount of exaggerated redacted bars in it when i get home. (Still at work)
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TLDR the current one that i posted is a partial one because i couldn’t use my OG Personnel File ingame because of character limitations in the character description.
 
Being frank real quick - what is the point of having lore so heavily redacted to the point where removing multiple portions would change absolutely nothing because of them?

To put it bluntly, although staff will still review this it may be difficult as they may have no idea what it truly means.
 
YandereMuffin said:
Being frank real quick - what is the point of having lore so heavily redacted to the point where removing multiple portions would change absolutely nothing because of them?

To put it bluntly, although staff will still review this it may be difficult as they may have no idea what it truly means.
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Read my messsages above please. This was a incomplete / placeholder version because of ingame limitations i have another version which is much more detailed and story rich and it doesn’t have 100 redacted bars like this one. As i stated in my message above i haven’t gotten around to updating my post yet as i’ve been quite busy dealing with irl stuff like work and family stuff today. But yeah thanks for the feedback anyways and i agree with your points.
 
Axiom said:
Thank you for the feedback,And yeah that’s true, I’ll post my personnel file version which is much more detailed / story rich also which doesn’t have the same amount of exaggerated redacted bars in it when i get home. (Still at work)
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I get wanting your lore hidden, but like, staff has to know it so they can review it, e.g. Imperial's lore request if anyone remembers that had a redacted version for players to read so they didn't get spoiled as well as the un redacted one for staff to review or players who simply didn't care for being spoiled

On top of this, I missed the same thing Niox did, inducing fear in people by staring at them just feels like.... powergaming.
 
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