Chocholanz's Game Master Application UK

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Chocho Zagorski

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Jan 22, 2023
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Original Steam login name (your accounts first ever name): chocholanz
For how long have you played on CG SCP-RP: I've been playing on this server since 22 January 2023.
Age: 15
In what country are you located?: Bulgaria
Time zone: GMT+2
Foundation Name (include your regiment and rank if applicable): Charles "Titan"
Chaos name (include your rank): CI-D Cooper 'Death'[IRU-AO][R&D]
Civilian name: Rumen Borisov
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:505520314
Discord ID: chochozagorski
Do you have a mic?: Yes, but I do not speak fluently English.
What server are you applying for?: SCP-RP UK
Is this the first application you made? If no, link all previous applications:
First Game-Master Application
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Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?:
Yes, I have received 3 warnings of which 1 is appealed. My first warning
was on 22 January 2023 for Naming Cons, and the reason was
because I named myself "The Administrator" as a D Class, my
second warning was on 21 January 2024 for RDM because I
killed a CI Conscript (as CI) for calling me a "Dumb Monkey".
I also had a third warning for Fear RP but it was appealed as the situation I was
put in gave me almost no time to react and from my prespective I didn't see I was
outnumbered.
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Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community?:
Sadly I dont have any previous experience as a Roleplay Keeper,
but I wish to change that.
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Do you have any previous experience with serious roleplay?:
Yes, I do have experience with Serious RP. Before buying and exploring GMod
I played on several servers on the platform called FiveM,
which sparked an interest for RP within me that is still going since mid 2022.
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How many hours can you be on everyday?:
Depending on the week (if I have exams) I can be on for between 3 and 4 hours.
During the weekends and holidays I could be probably on between 4 and 6 hours.
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Why do you want to become a Gamemaster on our server?:
I want to become a Game-Master to bring out more entertaning scenarios for players
and overall improve the RP experience.
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What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants?:
I believe my Pac3 knowledge and creativity could make me stand out
over the other applicants. Some of my Pac3 creatons:
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Nanobots Vest (like the last Iron Man suit) -clip
Helmet Transfer (from head to hand) -clip
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Please List 3 small event ideas (Which would involve at least one side of the server):
(OOC): The idea of this event is to utilize a MTF Unit Delta-45 also
known as "Rolling Thunder" in a fight between CI on surface. The fight is about stolen packages containing
various materials and items needed for repairs on their way to Site 65 transported
by a convoy of delivery trucks The whole airsupport can be a GM with 3
different Pac3 entities. 1 as an UAV, 1 as an A-10 and 1 as a Helicopter.
As an UAV Delta-45 can call out locations of enemies, as an A-10 it can airstrike any target
(using an Auger as a weapon representing a GAU-8), and a Helicopter for more accurate
shots but with lower weapons. To not make this Event too OP for Foundation, CI
can find and assemble a SAM Site and a Radar that they can use to shoot down the UAV's and Helicopters, but
also deny air entry of A-10 Warthogs. The SAM Parts can be find in the convoy that starts this whole madness.
Foundation's job is to successfully reobtain their goods before CI can successfully RTB them.
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(IC Intro CI): [CI Comms] Marksman: Sir, there is a convoy of 2 or 3 trucks turning in for Pinewood, could be a delivery for
GOC or Foundation.
[CI Comms] CO: Great find, can you tell us where are they or if they make any stops?
[CI Comms] Marksman: I can tell you they are on the Main Road and are like 5 mins away from the Foundation Site,
I could try to blow 1 of the tires and maybe slow them down or even cause them to crash in eachother.
[CI Comms] CO: Ok try to slow them down in the meantime all Operatives go near the main road and prepare to make
an ambush!
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(IC Intro F): [Cargo 32 -> Site 65] Hello Site 65 this is Cargo Unit 32, we are almost at you with
your monthly delivery.
*tires pop, and vehicles can be heard crashing*
[Cargo 32 -> Site 65] We are getting attacked! *gun fire can be heard* We need help, someone ambushed us.
[Cargo 32 -> Site 65] *Lost Signal*
[Site 65 -> Delta 45] *Connecting to Communication Network*
[Delta 45 -> Site 65] This is Delta 45, did you get your requested SAM Site for aerial defence against GOC Airstrikes?
[Site 65 -> Delta 45] About that, someone attacked the convoy and we lost all communications with them.
[Site 65 -> Delta 45] Is there anyway you can provide help while our operatives on the ground attempt to get the cargo back?
[Delta 45 -> Site 65] We have only a few things on our disposal currently but we will try to help. Scrambling a few of our Top Guns.
[Site 65 -> Delta 45] Thank you. Godspeed!
[SOP Comms] We need all operatives on surface, to terminate all CI and retrieve any crates or packages they have stolen!
(OOC): The event consists of MC&D transporting 5 specimens of SCP-514 near Pinewood, but they get in
a crash which results of the birds being released. After DEA get a report from MC&D
that they released SCP-514, DEA alert MTF Lambda-4. In the duration until the "Birdwatchers" come
there is peace on surface for the first time between all factions.
(IC Intro): [MC&D -> DEA] We kinda losts some birds in the area. Could you help us?
(OOC): Pinewood is getting attacted by another country and the UN have to establish
defences and provide medical aid to civilians. Because of the increasing Civilian casualities the
Foundation and CI begin helping GOC to defend it. Even though hating one another the Foundation
and Chaos Insurgency decide to call a cease fire to ensure the safety of the Civilians.
(IC Intro): *Explotions can be heard on surface*
[All Channels]: This is the United Nations. Please evacuate Pinewood and make your
way to the UN Base to be provided medical care if you are injured. The City is currently under attack
by unknown forces. This is Not a Test!
Please List an Map change event idea (Involving both sides and the entire server)
(OOC): A crosstest between TG and 8837 about testing
their space and reality warping abilities going wrong a number of high hume
spots are detected through surface and the facility levels. In these
hume spots there are breaches in reality leading to a mirror version
of our original universe, but dead. The Mirror Reality is home to a very dangerous
Entity that looks like a distorted 7722.
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(IC Intro Foundation): Researcher: Aight 8837 could you proceed to
open a portal?
*8837 opens a gateway*
Researcher: Type Green please enter the portal while using your body
switching ability on D-XXXX.
*After Type Green enters and body swaps with the D-Class a loud explotion can be heard
from the nearby fusebox and the lights go off.*
Researcher: What the hell just happened?
*Emergency Lights turn on and an alarm can be heard echoing in the near hallways*
Announcement System: Multiple Hume spikes can be detected through
the facility and surface. MTF Nu-7 and E-11 respond immediately.
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(IC Intro CI): *The lights inside the CI Bunker are turned off*
CI Comms [CO]: What happened with our lighting? Someone get it fixed!
*A light can be seen coming from the SCP Cell area*
CI Comms [Operative]: Uh why is there a glowing distortion in HCZ?
CI Comms: [CO]: No clue. R&D investigate it please!
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(IC Intro UNGOC): *A fusebox can be heard exploding near a powerline*
GOC Comms [Operative]: Uh boss, there is a glowing PTE near the PD.
GOC Comms [CO]: Gonna send out an announcement for civilians to stay in their homes.
[All Channels]: This is the United Nations, please stay indoors there is a current serial killer on the loose!
GOC Comms [CO]: All Units investigate the PTE and remove it from Pinewood if possible!
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(Map Change Idea): After entering a breach you will find yourself in 1 of 3 spots in
a destroyed Site 65. There will be no way out and after entering a breach you
loose any freq to a radio channel or a comms line. The will be 1 exit hidden throught the broken down
site that will lead to freedom. The closer a person is to the exit, the more often they will see
the Entity. Every 5 mins a breach will be closed on surface and inside the facility until there is
only 1 inside and 2 on surface. 10 minutes after only 3 breaches are left the last 3 will close resulting in a complete
collapse of the mirror dimention killing everybody inside.
List an example mission for each of the following:
(OOC): After a member of the O5 Council found a weird frame in an old
office that is now used as a closet with the number O5-14 he began researching
which triggered an internal alert placed by the Ethics Committee to ensure noone
remembers about Addendum 4339-3 from file: SCP-4339.
The O5 member already has SCP-4339 and O-1 have to get it
and amnesticate them before the rest of the Council learns the truth!
(IC Intro):
[O-1 Comms]: You have a new objective.
You have to capture O5-XX and secure SCP-4339. He knows
about O5-14, make him forget!
(OOC): 1 Instance of SCP-7760 was found inside Site 65 which
was held by approximatly 13 individuals of which 5 showed
that they wanted to defect to GOC like what happened during
Incident SCP-7760-16. A-1 has to find the 5 individuals before
they defect and leak viable information or be a part of
another SCP being destroyed by GOC.
(IC Intro):
[A-1 Comms] An instance of SCP-7760 is found within our site.
Secure it and find any individual that had contact with the anomaly,
ensure history doesn't repeat!
(OOC): Members of The Scarlet Church have been spotted in Pinewood
attempting to recruit civilians into their cult.
(IC Intro):
[Nu-7 Comms] Multiple individuals dressed as members of The Scarlet Church
have been spotted on surface. Nu-7 you have execute authority!
(OOC): SCP-5118 is returned to Site 65 after its shown to possess
some of its Class I Reality Bending powers. While its escorted to HCZ
to be placed in a CC it breaks out begins wreaking havoc and attempting to escape.
(IC Intro):
[Announcement System]: SCP-5118 Breached containment! All available E-11 units respond!
(OOC): A copy of SCP-5094 was stolen by Deep Covers that were
infiltrating Site 15 and transfered to Terror Cell 65. Shortly after securing it
CI started to study and use it.
(IC Intro):
[Site 15 DCs -> Cell 65]: We got 5094 and we are on our way to give it to you.
[Cell 65 -> Site 15 DCs]: Copy that we will secure the area for your arrival!
(OOC): After getting information about a new virus in Pinewood, the UN starts
setting up medical tents and testing zones to ensure the health and safety of Civilians.
A cure is synthesized after simular traits are found in the DNA of the virus body.
(IC Intro):
[Pinewood Hospital -> United Nations]: UN are you able to come and help us treat sick patients?
We have multiple of them and they are getting worse, we could really use your help!
(OOC): After CI cause another 008 breach this time more chaothic
the O5 request MTF Unit Beta-7 to recontain and eliminate the biohazard threat.
(IC Intro)
[??? -> B-7] We need immediate help with a lethal contamination at Site 65.
[B-7 -> ???] We are nearby. Help is on the way!
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Edited on 25.03 20:25 GMT+2: Fixed my blank application because I pressed CTRL+Enter which posted the thread instead of Shift+Enter for a new line.
Edited on 28.03 10:15 GMT+2: Rewrote the first event, also expanding my answers on some of the answers, and adding pictures
and clips of my pac3 creation.​
 
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Niox

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Original Steam login name (your accounts first ever name): chocholanz
For how long have you played on CG SCP-RP: I've been playing on this server since 22 January 2023.
Age: 15
In what country are you located?: Bulgaria
Time zone: GMT+2
Foundation Name (include your regiment and rank if applicable): Charles "Titan"
Chaos name (include your rank): CI-D Cooper 'Death'[IRU-AO][R&D]
Civilian name: Rumen Borisov
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:505520314
Discord ID: chochozagorski
Do you have a mic?: Yes, but I do not speak fluently English.
What server are you applying for?: SCP-RP UK
Is this the first application you made? If no, link all previous applications:
First Game-Master Application
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Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?:
Yes I have received 3 warnings of which 1 is appealed. My first warning
was on 22 January 2023 for Naming Cons and my second warning
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Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community?:
-
Do you have any previous experience with serious roleplay?:
-
How many hours can you be on everyday?:
-
Why do you want to become a Gamemaster on our server?:
-
What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants?:

Please List 3 small event ideas (Which would involve at least one side of the server):



Please List an Map change event idea (Involving both sides and the entire server)




List an example mission for each of the following:
O-1:
A-1:
Nu-7:
E-11:
CI:
UNGOC:
Foundation Staff:​
HMMMMMMMMMM
+Support
 

MrSiens

Senior Game Master
Senior Game Master
Mar 21, 2022
250
75
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-Support

Hello Chocho,
While I am happy to see you finished your application, there are a few things that make me feel unable to confidently support it.
-Lost and Found
I do not believe this would be a very good idea, as it would allow foundation to permanently keep all GOC air assistance on cooldown, locking out the GOC and shelling CI every few minutes, though if the GM acted as a reasonable mediator instead of completely handing over control to the players, this would be fine.

-Bird Migration
There is no practical way to force peace on surface, nor anywhere else, making this event impossible to run as described.

-Under Attack
The framing device could use some work "Pinewood is under attack" effectively meaning, a normal country decided to invade canada all of a sudden one day? However, the premise of all 3 factions calling a temporary truce to fight off an external threat (and then all backstabbing eachother as they always do) works well.

-Map Change
Very convoluted and not really a map change, i dont put too much stake into peoples map changes however, so not a pressing issue.

-Consequences
The framing device is incorrect, as the article itself says that Addendum 3 is the Overseer debrief, meaning this is something theyre meant to know about. The article even says "can only be done with unanimous council approval", which wouldnt make sense if any O5 who knew about it got shot in the head.

-A1 Mission
I think the number of individuals would need to be reduced, and the briefing for A1 improved, but is largely a fine event

-Nu7
I would avoid cult / civilian recruitment events, and Scarlet-king type events at all costs for a variety of reasons, as it causes players to behave in Destructive and unpredictable events, leading to those events often spiralling out of control and into mass chants of "the Scarlet king" on o-comms.

-E-11
Having E-11 fight yet another reality bender is not a very compelling idea for an event.

-CI
Having run an event like this myself, I like this one, though id stress that CI doesnt get to pick the lessons and cant just go "Miss J teach us about building Nukes"

-UNGOC
There is no practical way to cause a viral outbreak, especially considering how most civilians are not inclined to roleplay, so i think you would significantly struggle with running this event as described.

-Foundation Staff
008 breach but an offsite MTF is called in?
Not a compelling idea, and also does not actually involve Foundation staff besides being murdered by 008.

Now, onto more general issues with this application
The Writing is very "Hello, do the thing." "Yes." which is very stale and uninteresting, and I worry that this would carry through onto your Dialogue with the players.

The Ideas in general are mostly generic or SCP reliant, and dont tend to do anything particularilly interesting with the SCP itself

Several of your ideas are not very feasibly doable, though during the GM trial period, one tends to get more familiar with what can and cannot be done, so i dont consider this a big issue.

Lastly, you mentioned having notable PAC3 experience, could you perhaps add examples of your work? saying you are good at pac3 does not really make a strong argument, but if you were to show off some of the things you have made, that could speak in your favour.

to Summarise, your application is mostly fine, but lacking in certain key areas and some events would require elaboration, tweaks or rewrites.

Best of Luck!
 

RedMann

Game Master
Game Master
Apr 6, 2023
271
104
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-/+ Neutral leaning +support

I Think theres a lot of thought and research put into this application as you mention a whole host of interesting SCPs, one thing I would suggest is developing how an SCP gets to Site-65 and why it's there and what it will do. Simply bringing an SCP on site is great RP and makes for a solid event but developing it a little further will really seal the deal. I would expand on it just a wee bit more and make it less handholdy, try not define who exactly will be dealing with a particular event as it isn't something you can guarantee
 

François "Napoléon"

Senior Game Master
Senior Game Master
Feb 16, 2023
129
22
21
-/+ Neutral
Altought research was put into the app and on scps. Some areas don't elaborate enought on what the events entail. Also like redman said you can never predict who will do what. That asside i'm still leaning somewhat to +support since it seems like you are putting in the effor, I can't deny it. Also just saying i'm unsure this would be considered a map change, it feels a bit simple as well.
 

Chocho Zagorski

Well-known Member
Jan 22, 2023
20
1
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-Support

Hello Chocho,
While I am happy to see you finished your application, there are a few things that make me feel unable to confidently support it.
-Lost and Found
I do not believe this would be a very good idea, as it would allow foundation to permanently keep all GOC air assistance on cooldown, locking out the GOC and shelling CI every few minutes, though if the GM acted as a reasonable mediator instead of completely handing over control to the players, this would be fine.

-Bird Migration
There is no practical way to force peace on surface, nor anywhere else, making this event impossible to run as described.

-Under Attack
The framing device could use some work "Pinewood is under attack" effectively meaning, a normal country decided to invade canada all of a sudden one day? However, the premise of all 3 factions calling a temporary truce to fight off an external threat (and then all backstabbing eachother as they always do) works well.

-Map Change
Very convoluted and not really a map change, i dont put too much stake into peoples map changes however, so not a pressing issue.

-Consequences
The framing device is incorrect, as the article itself says that Addendum 3 is the Overseer debrief, meaning this is something theyre meant to know about. The article even says "can only be done with unanimous council approval", which wouldnt make sense if any O5 who knew about it got shot in the head.

-A1 Mission
I think the number of individuals would need to be reduced, and the briefing for A1 improved, but is largely a fine event

-Nu7
I would avoid cult / civilian recruitment events, and Scarlet-king type events at all costs for a variety of reasons, as it causes players to behave in Destructive and unpredictable events, leading to those events often spiralling out of control and into mass chants of "the Scarlet king" on o-comms.

-E-11
Having E-11 fight yet another reality bender is not a very compelling idea for an event.

-CI
Having run an event like this myself, I like this one, though id stress that CI doesnt get to pick the lessons and cant just go "Miss J teach us about building Nukes"

-UNGOC
There is no practical way to cause a viral outbreak, especially considering how most civilians are not inclined to roleplay, so i think you would significantly struggle with running this event as described.

-Foundation Staff
008 breach but an offsite MTF is called in?
Not a compelling idea, and also does not actually involve Foundation staff besides being murdered by 008.

Now, onto more general issues with this application
The Writing is very "Hello, do the thing." "Yes." which is very stale and uninteresting, and I worry that this would carry through onto your Dialogue with the players.

The Ideas in general are mostly generic or SCP reliant, and dont tend to do anything particularilly interesting with the SCP itself

Several of your ideas are not very feasibly doable, though during the GM trial period, one tends to get more familiar with what can and cannot be done, so i dont consider this a big issue.

Lastly, you mentioned having notable PAC3 experience, could you perhaps add examples of your work? saying you are good at pac3 does not really make a strong argument, but if you were to show off some of the things you have made, that could speak in your favour.

to Summarise, your application is mostly fine, but lacking in certain key areas and some events would require elaboration, tweaks or rewrites.

Best of Luck!
Sorry for they late responce, but I was occupied in the last 3 days. Thank you for leaving your review and opinion, I read it and tried to rewrite and fix some of my application but its not tweaked entirely because of the time it took me to fix the first event. It will take me a while to finish tweaking the other 10 events. I hope you will take your time to review my application once again is fully tweaked!
 

baneyo

Well-known Member
Aug 31, 2022
84
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+Support

In my time of being in CI with cooper, hes proved to me that hes mature, respectful and a good person to Roleplay for. I feel like he can have a chance of immersing our RP in CI and even the server. In general I think hes a good choice to pick as a Game Master.

Best of Luck
Cain!
 

Critical

Senior Administrator
Senior Administrator
SCP-RP Staff
Platform Team
Event Team
Donator
Group Moderator
Jun 6, 2022
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Application Denied

Hi Chocholanz,

Thanks for taking the time to make a gamemaster application.

Unfortunately, we have decided to deny your gamemaster application.

We feel your event ideas are lacking in depth behind how they would work/what they would be about. You have the right ideas with pulling idea from lore SCPs but we would like to see you expand on the event idea behind them.

You may re-apply in 2 weeks​
 
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