Maximillian Willson's Site Advisor Application

MyrefleX

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Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47809937
Discord name: MyrefleX#2031
For how long have you played on CG SCP: Since 2021
Age: 15
In what country are you located?: Germany
Time zone: Fri-Sun 12am-10pm Sun13am-8pm
Character name(s): Maximillian Willson
Civilian name: Johnny willson
What server are you applying for? (SCP-RP UK or SCP-RP USA): SCP-RP UK
Do you have a mic?: Yes, of course
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List all whitelisted, MTF, or CI roles that you hold or have held: CI-A(HOLDING) MTF-Nu7 CPL(HOLDING)
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Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?: Yeah i have recived kicks and a view Bans becouse of some stupid stuff like Mic spam and other suff
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Why are you applying for Site Advisor? Becouse i want to be a Part of the Site Administraiton of the facility and work with the other CL4 Member of the Facility
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What makes you suitable for Site Administration?: What makes me suitable for the Site Advisor?During my time as a MTF-Nu7 I was in charge of relations so I understand how to deal with people as a whole and i feel that's the major thing that makes me fit for the job, and Due to a site advisor being a public figure for the site this would come in very handy. It has given me a lot more understanding and site policies in general; it has also given me a chance to understand the process and procedures of how to change policies
What are the responsibilities of Site Administration in RP?:
Authorisation of Advanced Armoury Assets
They make sure all the departments are behaving correctly and they make sure to reward departments that are doing good
They connect between departments if they feel it is
Authorizing AA, Sweep, passive SCP, and mass termination
They make sure during the Emergency code all MTFs are working together to deal with it [only if it is acode 2]
Site administration is helping with policies in departments that need to be different
Site administration make sure all Equipment or Chemicals that are needed for the department or MTF are there to use them
Site administration also overwatche other departments and MTFs to make sure they are effective
Appointment and interviewing of other Senior
CL4 positions, such as MTF Commanders or Department Directors
Activities such as authorisation of HCZ closure for trainings, dealing with minor disputes (if need be) and other activities

Please give some lore about your Site Administration character and what storylines they would be involved in:
Maximillian Willson was born and raised in the small town of Munich, Germany He was always a bright and curious child, interested in the unknown, but it wasn't until he turned 18 that he decided to pursue a career as an Special Canadian Force

Since then, Max has been involved in some of the most dangerous and secretive operations in the world. His skill at blending in and gathering intelligence in a wide variety of environments has enabled him to uncover and prevent major criminal activities.

He has travelled around the world, infiltrating gangs, breaking up Enemy bases, and thwarting terrorist attacks. Despite the danger and stress of his job, Max has kept a cool head and has never lost his sense of humor.

After four years of service, he was recruited by the SCP Foundation in 2006 after encountering SCP-323, successfully terminating a 323-1 instance. Max has been working as a MTF Nu-7 Operative for the past 14 years, specializing in the his carrer and protection of the Facility. He excels in working in environments where quick thinking and creativity are needed, using his knowledge of the Enemy to devise creative solutions to threats that may otherwise seem impossible.
Max is highly respected among his peers and superiors. He is regarded as a reliable operative who is always willing to put himself in harm's way for the safety of others. His work is often praised for its accuracy and efficiency, and his cool-headed nature is seen as an asset in difficult situations.

During his time in MTF Nu-7 Max has proven himself to be a prime example of an effective Nu-7 operator. This earned him the title of MTF Nu-7 Commander, his dedication to his work, his courage, and his expertise have made him a valuable asset to the SCP Foundation. After spending 2 years as the MTF Nu-7 Commander, he was dragged into a room, surrounded by the darkness, a table with a set of two chairs were the only things illuminated. After being interviewed by a man in a dark suit, who never took his pitch black shades off, Max was offered the new position of Site Advisor, where to this day, he leads Departments, ensuring their functionality, following one simple mindset
 
In your application you state some valid duties of a Site advisor however there are some that you are either mistaken about or a little vague about including the appointment of Senior CL4 the key part there is that SA interview for DPT lead roles excluding O-1 COM and ISD Director which is EC and vice versa with A-1 COM and RSD Director being O5. With this duty 'They make sure during the Emergency code all MTFs are working together to deal with it [only if it is acode 2]' you are not completely right about that during a code 2 in some cases MTF personnel are necessary but in most, they are not, in reality, what you are stating would be more suitable for a Code 1 however the duty you should have referred to which this goes under is that SA ensures that the site is performing properly and that coded emergencies are being responded to at an efficient rate.

With the fact that your lore is Ai generated and that you have not even held a CL4 positon,and also the fact that your application is the most bare-bones and low-effort attempt ever seen I will be giving you a -support. If you really want to go for SA at some point your first step would be to gain Cl4 experience mainly junior cl4 and possibly some senior however that is not a requirement where as junior Cl4 is.
Good luck!
 

MyrefleX

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In your application you state some valid duties of a Site advisor however there are some that you are either mistaken about or a little vague about including the appointment of Senior CL4 the key part there is that SA interview for DPT lead roles excluding O-1 COM and ISD Director which is EC and vice versa with A-1 COM and RSD Director being O5. With this duty 'They make sure during the Emergency code all MTFs are working together to deal with it [only if it is acode 2]' you are not completely right about that during a code 2 in some cases MTF personnel are necessary but in most, they are not, in reality, what you are stating would be more suitable for a Code 1 however the duty you should have referred to which this goes under is that SA ensures that the site is performing properly and that coded emergencies are being responded to at an efficient rate.

With the fact that your lore is Ai generated and that you have not even held a CL4 positon,and also the fact that your application is the most bare-bones and low-effort attempt ever seen I will be giving you a -support. If you really want to go for SA at some point your first step would be to gain Cl4 experience mainly junior cl4 and possibly some senior however that is not a requirement where as junior Cl4 is.
Good luck!
Its not AI generated
 
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Applying straight for SA without any CL4 experience what so ever and barely being an NCO.
Your reason for applying is barely a sentence long and the reasoning is to work with other CL4 personnel which you can do on any job even CL3 and is a poor reason for going for SA.


Can you post Vtime and warns.
I strongly recommend playing a few more roles and gaining some CL4 experience along with a proof read of the application
Also given what cain has posted and numerous problems within the app, have you wrote this up in german and then just popped it in google translate?
 
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People can be quite harsh on newcomers, lets be a bit nicer with proper feedback.

The application for Site Advisor does state level 45 only which falls in line with whats expected. Best thing you can do to climb in to something like Site Advisor is find a department you enjoy playing in and progress to CL4 that way. You play Nu7 so my best bet is DEA would be a good oppprtunity for you to grow.

All the best regardless
 
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Hey!

So as you have probably seen from the rest of the feedback this is not the greatest of applications however it is a start. As stated by Broda and several others you lack in experiance being as you've only held the position of Nu-7 CPL, with this in mind I highly suggest getting into another department that is more focused on the administrative part such as DEA or ISD. A good way to gain experiance within CL4 is to play ISD since you have a bit more oversight within the facility.

If we go back to the application itself I highly suggest putting in a bit more time maybe elaborating a bit on the given answers for example: Why do you want to become a site advisor? "From my perspective Site Administration is heavily lacking within its activity and I believe I can have a substantial inpact on such, being as I have quite a lot of free time." Stuff like that is quite good to add when it comes to the application, another good advice is to inspect other site admin applications and possibly getting some inspiration from them.

Never the less good luck!