-Support
It's not my thing to -support directly but I do feel like most of the events here need an overal. They feel too basic and in general not interresting enought. Especially since you are a member of site command I find it surprising that the isd event are this bland.
-Both the O1 and A1...
Visually it changed the handguard thats how the part is called. A wooden barrel would not work for a gun at all. Unless you have anomalous wood I guess which you could have in this universe...
First wdym wood stock barrel and grip, the only wood parts are the stock and handguard. Next I'm fairly sure this will get denied since you aren't allowed to change weapon from what I was told.
-Support
DEA used to be B1, wich used to be a better external affairs so they got merged. You wana merged the already merged department for some overall pointless reason. I have seen multiple times that DEA and NU7 can exist together. Also merging both is such a huge change for what if is...
Following said Interrogation, it was concluded that François despite his knowledge of the 10/12 incident (See addendum 2), as well as all other details from his “past” life, was effectively not the same person. Even if he shares similar memories, it is clear that he saw them from an outside...
Hello.
As the one who made the pac I can tell you the stuff on it are extremly basic so it will not tank frames. It is made of very few parts and one player model (the suit). It is honnestly just simple models with special textures to do a visual trick nothing complex.
-Support
I'll have to -support due to multiple issues I have with the app.
-First the formating is really bad: all same color and font type (no bigger letters nothing) making it very annoying to read (can't tell wich question is where)
-Multiple spelling mistakes. Now i'm french i'm not the...
+ support.
BUT: GOC should keep a one tap sniper.
GOC is meant to be stronger and more scary. Make it so other snipers only have DMR or smth of the likes, but goc get a bolt action 50 cal (For the slower rate of fire). Would make the balance interresting. GOC can dome you but only if you agro...
+/- Neutral
I agree with what was said by the two previous gms:
-Map change is not a map change. The map Needs to be different is what it entails (go check other apps for reference).
-Some events are a bit lacking notably in the Department and goi ones (Aka the one after the map change)...
-Support
RIght let me list everything that is wrong with this app:
Formating: Difficult to read, Everything is the same color and size. Go look at how accepted apps did it because formating helps a LOT.
Description: All event are barrely described and if they are it's barrely useful:
New Geek...
-/+ Neutral
I will be honest, some of what you show is not half bad, I checked the document you provided and clearly you did some decent work as a gm in the past, despite that I still see some issues wich make me wonder if you would be a good gm here.
First of all, i'll agree with Jeremy...
-Support
So I respect your choice to try to be a gm but, did you try to put any effort in this?
All events are described in litteraly 2 sentences and don't even go into detail.
The map change one litteraly is not event made of proper sentences.
You seem to have ideas on what to do for events...
-/+ Neutral
Altought research was put into the app and on scps. Some areas don't elaborate enought on what the events entail. Also like redman said you can never predict who will do what. That asside i'm still leaning somewhat to +support since it seems like you are putting in the effor, I can't...
+support
All events are fairly well explained.
Ideas are quite interresting.
Fondation event feels more like just an SCP event wich will involve mostly research and E11.
Map change might be too chaotic since all main groups would be included at the same time.
Not gona lie you cooked well enought.
+Support
I can respect a man that wishes to be gm when they are able to put pump out pac like these.
Not the most impressive work for sure but being able to texture and make some custom models is a thing I like to see.
Your event ideas are ok. I do believe they could see some improvement but...
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