-Support
- You failed to explain what truly is happening and some parts does not make sense without said explaining
- I can not see O1 section
- Overall not a good app
You can improve with formatting and explaining what is happening, And I wish you all the luck.
Jax, Before I read it, Please format it better, Try putting events in between spoilers to make it easier to read.
Also, Please explain what these "Unknown" Things are in a OOC section so we have a better view at the event.
-Support
Every event feels unfinished or uncertain of what is happening Example
You also don't explain how anything works/happens example
Okay thats what you tell the players, But what are they truly?
I also have never seen you around, and am doubting your activity, If you could, Send a...
Neutral leaning towards -Support
-/+ Not heard the best about you
-/+ Lore is okay
- You have been a SA for 3 months and I haven't seen you once.
+ Good App
-/+ Support
-/+ There are better people applying
-/+ Only RP I have seen you do is blowing up people and saying "You know what makes me a good demoman!" which is funny but not ideal for O5-2.
+/-Support
-Your lore is mostly based around you being a GOC member instead of you old CL4 jobs, That wouldn't be bad, But The O5 wouldn't hire a Ex-Goc to be their assistant right off the bat.
- Don't think you are suited for this job
+/- Normal activity
+ Has past CL4 roles
I still...
-Support
-Bad app
-One of the worst lore I have seen yet with mistakes (Why office put alone bro)
-Never heard good things about you
-/+ Never interacted with you.
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