-- Support
- Not much experience as IA judging by your VTime
- Our ambassadors say you don't use your mic, which is imperative for the role of Ambassador
- "I may not know much about becoming an Internal Affairs Ambassador" not a great line to put in an Ambassador application...
- (Edit) You've...
- Support
Sorry but this application is incredibly hard to read and quite frankly lacking greatly. You should get a better reason for joining as well. I don't exactly know what you meant by "internal op liberating" but we don't liberate as Ambassadors... I would improve your activity as an...
+/-Neutral
+ Great Director while he lasted
+ Great Ethics member
+/- Hasn't added much lore since his last denial
+/- Hasn't stated an O5 number/position
=Neutral
+ Super active
+ Puts in a lot of effort
+ A long time on the server
+/- Has barely any lore, 8 sentences of content
- Can be really mingy
- Has been banned from IA 4 times, was removed from ambassador previously
I think you would be a decent Director when it comes to punishing agents...
In my opinion, you don't really have enough lore, "it's redacted" or "could not be found" are just really bad excuses for a lack of creativity. I can't give any support since I have never met you, but I would say to improve your lore.
-- SUPPORT
- Very short answers
- 30% of your application is answering the actual questions, 70% is lore. This is not a joke.
- Doesn't know the responsibilities of an executive
- You have only written 1 excellent grade document
- Has been arrested for unethical testing and CoC/CoE violations a...
- SUPPORT
- Very short application / lackluster
- No lore whatsoever
- Spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes all over
- Barely knows the responsibillities
The fact that you began talking about control may show that you care more about power and the title.
I completely respect your verdict and the council's reasoning, however I would love some elaboration on which behaviour it was specifically. Please contact me at Comrade#9999 if you have time.
Just a heads up that I made some additions to my application corresponding to recent events within the DIA. This will be labelled "Edit [mm/dd/yyyy]:" accordingly.
This is not an attempt at boosting my application, as my application is the only one that is active under this channel.
- SUPPORT
- This application is really minimal / rushed
- Lackluster lore
- This grammar / punctuation is pretty bad
- You are constantly editing your application while it is up
My advice is to fix your application and make sure it's great before you upload it, as editing your application...
+/- Neutral
+ Good RP
+ Great GENSEC Cpt (ex)
-/+ I don't know how you perform on US servers
+/- Lore is a bit short, but that's fine for Ambassador
I don't know whether or not you behave differently on US servers, but good luck!
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