+Huge Support
+Detail and the application itself is IMPECCABLE
+Events are interesting ideas although is mainly Combative focused as @FakeLts has said. I would recommend changing a few ideas for events to some passive events such as SCP related ones and maybe a fun one such as opening up a...
Neutral leaning to +Support
+Detail is great in most of the application itself
This application lacks a LOT. You didn't even bother much with the small missions. You basically just said what they do but in other words. I would recommend you applying for Staff rather than Gamemaster.
Good Luck...
NEUTRAL
+The application has great grammar and vocabulary
It just needs some more effort into the missions. You aren't really telling us what the end result of the mission will be if it has been successful and you are not saying much of what's happenening. Example: Nu-7: An army of spiders are...
+Support
+Application is impeccable
-/+ Haven't had any interactions
-/+ Age is a little concerning but you seem like you want to join and you could do fantastic on the team which is why I am leaving my verdict as +Support.
Good Luck,
-Xeno Nefeli
+Support
-Application is impeccable
-Mature
-Very understanding/understandable
-Fantastic rule knowledge
-Events are interesting and could be used in the server
Overall, I feel that Simon should be given the role as he deserves it.
Good Luck,
-Xeno Nefeli
+Support
-Very understanding/understandable
-Mature
-Active
-Answers to some questions are only 1 sentences or 2 and aren't much detailed. Apart from that the application is spot on!
Good Luck,
-Xeno Nefeli
-Support
This one is very hard to read and you have done the bare minimum. In fact probably less than the bare minimum. It's just awful man. You should try spacing it out more, making it look a bit more neater and add more detail into this. Grammar needs a little work on. You also need to add...
Thanks for your verdicts, I appreciate them a lot. I have been reading all these to improve both myself and my application.
Thanks to all the following feedback:
@Adam 'Thunder' Herotaci
@Darren
@ionboy64
@Alex Bones
@Erl Carlson
@nirvan
@Grif
@John Paul.
@Bill fryer (screech lord)
@'Kyzent...
+Support
Creative
Very productive
Mature
Grammar on point
Great Application
-Overall I feel as Jeremy is suitable and fits the role well.
Good luck on the application my friend!! ?
Good Luck,
-Xeno Nefeli
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