Damian Jackson Mackayne's 4th Lore

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So basically this will be following the lore I created with O5-6 and Dr Wondertainment, it consists of my character travelling through SCP-2264-B and also has some ties to SCP-701.


It begins:

After the incident with Dr Wondertainment’s comic book, A-1 got involved for the search for Dr Wondertainment , due to the comic book containing a member of O5. A combined DEA-A1 taskforce would be formed. This taskforce comprising of multiple External Affairs agents including Damian Jackson Mackayne and Alpha-1 units would try to track down Wondertainment facilities in order to successfully capture or kill the person or people behind Dr Wondertainment LLC. On one raid against a supposed Wondertainment facility containing an anomalous laboratory, the facility scientists were successfully able to evacuate using anomalous teleportation (apportation). They left a letter on the behalf of Dr Wondertainment, the letter contained a message: “Dear Foundation,
I think you became a bit angry when I accidentally leaked your precious O5-6’s name. But could you stop RAIDING MY FACILITIES? Here, if you go to my play I promise I will turn myself in to the Foundation. You will have to travel to the Grand Theatre next to the Palace Library within the Kingdom Of Alagadda or how you call it SCP-2264-B. And so a team of extremely disciplined DEA and A-1 operatives lead by DEA Special Agent Damian Jackson Mackayne due to his expertise in thaumaturgy would enter SCP-2264-B by using a philosopher’s stone. As soon as they entered Alaggada their possessions dissapeared and their clothes changed. Phase 1 had begun.. Damian Jackson Mackayne’s red and black suit changed into a beautiful red and black robe. The A-1 and DEA agents also had their uniforms changed, still being masked but their uniforms had a more medieval look with their masks changed into the form of that of knights helmet and the DEA’s helmets changing into that of squires. The team would continue through Alaggada, their discipline training was enough to keep them from succumbing to the attractive pleasures within the dimension. They had the luck that the ambassador was not close, so they were able to travel safely through the dimension. Thaumaturgic shrines littered the kingdom, from sarkic shrines to daviate ruins. They went through through the Palace Library and into the Grand Theatre, there they were greeted by Wondertainment staff. They were asked to sit down and wait for the play to begin. Phase 2 of the plan was initiated, the man behind everything which had happened appeared on stage. “Hello! My name is Dr Wondertainment, I am here to turn myself in. But first off I have made a play for you! It's called the Hanged Fool! And guess what, you guys are the people who are gonna participate!'' As Dr Wondertainment was finished talking, he forced multiple DEA and A-1 to play, minding controlling them. The play resembled that of the Hanged King, especially at the end when he forced them to kill themselves. The rest of the DEA and A-1 who had been restrained in their seats were able to break free and tried to attack and subdue Dr Wondertainment. Dr Wondertainment said: ''Oh and about me giving myself up? That was a lie!'' While he spat blood in the face of one of the A-1. Damian Jackson Mackayne tackled him and started to beat him to a pulp, he was done with Wondertainments antics. He has ruined hundreds of lives, tore up families and destroyed minds. As Wondertainment staff was able to push Jackson off Wondertainment he was able to escape into the darkness. The A-1 and DEA fought off the rest of the staff and began exploring the Grand Theatre, with Dr Wondertainment having escaped the Foundations clutches once more. The taskforce found where most of Dr Wondertainments anomalous products were stored, deep into the halls of the Grand Theatre. They also found the test subjects of Dr Wondertainment, namely those of SCP-3147. As they found them Phase 3 of the plan initiated as a portal opened behind them. It was O5-6, all this time while the operation was going on she had been going through the books on how to succesfully open a portal to the Kingdom Of Alaggada, she was succesfull but it caused a lot of backlash. They went through the portal and while they didn't succeed in their final mission. They did do a good blow to Dr Wondertainments operations.

The children were interviewed on their experiences and given Class-E amnestics.
 

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Request Denied


Hello @Joseph Stolen (Damian),

Thanks for taking the time to make a Lore request.
We have decided to deny your request due to the following reasons:

- Your lore states that Dr Wondertainment is a specific male person, whilst within a lot of SCP lore Dr Wondertainment is kept as a mysterious figure that may not even exist, we would prefer for the server to keep the mysterious sections of Dr Wondertainments lore.

- The structure of your writing, although not a large issue, could be seen as breaking the rule 1 of submissions stating to "Also avoid giant walls of text. Utilize paragraphs", while writing your lore we recommend structuring it to make it easy for the readers to understand.

- Certain portions of this lore lack detail or are under explained, which could create unnecessary arguments within RP about it. Although not a major issue, explaining the more confusing parts of your lore could add to the quality of it.

Your request will now be locked and marked as denied.​
 
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