justfire GM application US

[Firerust77]

What server are you applying for: US


Your Username: firerust7/justfire


Your SteamID:STEAM_0:1:746087198


Discord Username: sheluvfventtt


Age:15


What's your current playtime (type !time in-game): 6 Days worth of hours


Do you have a mic:yes


Your characters name: Jimmy "Delta" Doaks


List all the names of the characters that you use (Foundation, Civillian, e.t.c.):
Adrian 'Johannes' Brecht :CIV
Jimmy 'Delta' Doaks: Found
Alex Jaque: CI
Lacy Kilii : GOC

Is this the first application you made? If no, link all previous applications:
Yes first app for GM

Have you received any kicks/warns/bans, and if so, why:
Recently i have it was for a fail rp situation do not remember much about it but it was a dumb mistake i made at like 3:00 to 2:00 in the morning that i regret

How many hours can you be on everyday: 10hrs

Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community: No, I have not this will be my first experience


Why would you like to become a Gamemaster:
I would like to become a Gamemaster to help create awesome events for the community, such as murder scenes for the ISD, and engaging anomaly missions for the RSD and E-11. Becoming a Gamemaster would allow me to support other players and fellow GMs in SCP-RP. I am a very creative person, and I believe this opportunity would open a new door for me within SCP-RP, a door to great, immersive events and storytelling.

What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants:
I think with my creative mind and my endless ideas for things I could never do I would be a great fit over other applicants I've put a lot of time and work into this server I think I should be chosen for GM for a lot of reasons I mean you guys are looking for creative people and I am surely creative I'm great at designing things and building stuff for this server

Please List 3 small event ideas (Which would involve at least one side of the server):
A murder scene in quarantine room with 4 suspects hidden evidence all in inner medical bay
A missing technician "missing in maintenance tunnels"
Ghost boy scp runs around haunting his enemy's

Please List an map change event idea (Involving both sides and the entire server):A door opens in HTZ Leading to a new room with skeletons everywhere and the room smells of decay and at the end of the room there's a button that button brings you to another doo in PW wing and you cant go back in unless you go back to HTZ


List an example mission for each of the following (O-1, A-1, Nu-7, E-11, CI, UNGOC & Foundation Staff):

O-1 Echo Protocol A HR Ethic committee has gone rouge and is leaking documents that have been classified to an parawatch and 0-1 is deployed to find the EC member and recover any classified docs and Amnesticate anyone under the clearance 4

A-1: Asset extraction Tier Zero
An O5 council member is visiting a location and A-1 is tasked with full protection intelligence sweep of the area but a scp breach happens and A-1 now has to extract and secure the O5 Council member and maintain secrecy

NU-7 Operation Cold Reaper
Intel confirms a CI cell is operating out of a small shack Nu-7 is deployed to breach it and recover stolen scp Equipment and capture any CI on site Nu-7 have to breach and clear the shack recover foundation assets capture CI and Secure anomalous items for site transport

E-11:
A mysterious radio like auditory anomaly begins broadcasting within Site-65. Staff report phantom voices, coded numbers, and emotional disorientation. The broadcasts are not traceable to any known internal system, and those who hear them for too long become erratic or hostile. E-11 must Locate the signal source, Determine if it's an anomalous event, CI tech, or memetic SCP and Quarantine affected personnel.

CI: Operation Hollow Spark
When a code 5 containment beach CI go into the facility and sabotage the electrical systems causing containment failures with more scps also taking out lights causing a mass containment breach CI must then terminate as much E-11 while still down in HTZ and exfil when all is said and done.

UNGOC: Operation Beacon’s Verdict
UNGOC has intercepted data suggesting Foundation DEA are operating something anomolys in the nearby town not explicitly an SCP yet, but showing uncontrolled effects on civilians perception.

FOUNDATION STAFF: Operation Code White
A black hole has opened in the wall near Non spec, And foundation personal ISD, GSD and E-11 have to secure the area and make sure no one except for researchers can enter or investigate this black hole. Inside its another version of site 65 a darkened one where there's nothing but darkness. A team of research specialists must search the area for clues on how this black whole opened.

 

[Layra "Nyx" Nightfall]

CI: Operation Hollow Spark
When a code 5 containment beach CI go into the facility and sabotage the electrical systems causing containment failures with more scps also taking out lights causing a mass containment breach CI must then terminate as much E-11 while still down in HTZ and exfil when all is said and done.

Isn't this just a regular raid?

-Nyx event team

 

[Willow 'Despoiler']

Sadly, this is a -support from me lad.
Your CI event is a normal raid, all of the events could use a bit more explaining on how it would occur. Think of the how not just what's happening in it. Your GOC event is non existent, the O1 event is lackluster, if even an event worthy, I do like the E11 but put more into the how and why on it, and the map change is extremely lack luster, you are also supposed to link a map, as map change usually means event specifically on an entirely new map. You only have 2 small events listed, your still fairly new, i haven't seen you around alot. You can definetely do better, and i am sure you could make a good tgm, you just need to dive into your ideas more.

 

[Author]

-/+ Neutral +/-

- No experience
- Very little Detail on event ideas, Some of your Ideas seem to be just normal occurrences with a little more added to them (which is good just not for a Regular or Major Event, a small event would be perfect for this)
+ I've personal have had good encounters with you on the server
+ willing to learn
-/+ Still new to the server

 

[Shark]

Heyo!

This looks like the start of a good application but I want to leave some feedback on your current application.

So Gamemasters are inherently a position of trust within the player base and as such we push for good quality events whenever we can so we can build trust with the players. That will be foundation I base my feedback off of.


Map Change Events generally involve one specific map for the duration of the event, hot swapping between two maps in a given map is difficult at best. When you fill out that section of the application, I highly suggest having a specific map in mind (preferably one available on the workshop.) Unless you're proficient in Hammer (source's mapping tool), you won't be able to modify or create your own maps for your events so you'll need to piggy back off existing maps (which is fine.)


As for your individual regiment events, some of them have a good start but others need to their foundation improved.

O-1's event could be interesting, but you should elaborate on how you would go about planning for this type of event. For example, reaching out to a specific ECM/ECC on the server that may be interested in something like this and what you'll do if none of the EC are willing to play the role of the rogue ECM in your event.

A-1's event is very much standard operations for A-1. We want events to stand out from normal gameplay so I'll encourage you to find a new idea for this section.

Nu-7's event is similar to A-1's. It could be interesting but I think you'll need to expand on this idea and how you plan to make "more" out of it (perhaps using it as a way to recover an anomalous object that does something to the Nu-7 team.)

E-11, this is good event. I think involving both E-11 and Medical to work together to find the source of this would be good. You should expand on what exactly the source would be if you were to run the event though.

CI's event sounds very similar to a normal raid. I would expand on this or just rework it entirely.

UNGOC's event you need to expand on what you mean. This is very vague at the current moment. Remember you're writing as if you're planning an event, not advertising for one.

Foundation Staff's event is strange. You would have to do a lot of work to justify it in an in character capacity and have it lead to something that is substantial. I would say this can work but you need to do a lot of work to make it a good quality event.


I would say this is the start to a good application but I'd encourage you to rewrite some portions of it to reach the standard we have for applicants.

Best of luck,
Shark

 

[Firerust77]

Sadly, this is a -support from me lad.
Your CI event is a normal raid, all of the events could use a bit more explaining on how it would occur. Think of the how not just what's happening in it. Your GOC event is non existent, the O1 event is lackluster, if even an event worthy, I do like the E11 but put more into the how and why on it, and the map change is extremely lack luster, you are also supposed to link a map, as map change usually means event specifically on an entirely new map. You only have 2 small events listed, your still fairly new, i haven't seen you around alot. You can definetely do better, and i am sure you could make a good tgm, you just need to dive into your ideas more.

Im sorry that you think that but im really trying to make better ideas i was creating this all last night but i hope in the future i can make better ideas

 

[Firerust77]

-/+ Neutral +/-

- No experience
- Very little Detail on event ideas, Some of your Ideas seem to be just normal occurrences with a little more added to them (which is good just not for a Regular or Major Event, a small event would be perfect for this)
+ I've personal have had good encounters with you on the server
+ willing to learn
-/+ Still new to the server

yes i am very much willing to learn i tried as much to put detail but i hope to create better ideas in the future