[SCP-RP UK] Site Advisor( SA) Application: Darrel Sparks/Darell Junior

[Senkai]

+support
-active
-funny guy
-deservse it.

-Senkai

 

[Jack Raider]

Sorry for the wait, hope all of your demands are meet.

Here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d4XXs63tSTQW-d7yvLzcbB03_Je0sjlADUgKGrzUibI/edit?usp=sharing

I usually do not comment on applications anymore, but this document proves anyone that accused you of using AI was right, from my experience 80% of the document is AI generated. You see, when you want some lore/RP be generated by AI it spits out something that is completely out of place and do not know anything about the server map or any departmental policies. I will not be using any detectors, because they are simply shit, but what you provided in the document is not how humans write RP scenarios/lore, there are many AI musthave phrases in this piece.

I am not leaving - or + support, but you should rethink how you respond to others under your applications and should gather more experience and familiarise yourself with the server more.
Good luck.

 

[Broda]

Changed to -Support

 

[Darrel Sparks]

I usually do not comment on applications anymore, but this document proves anyone that accused you of using AI was right, from my experience 80% of the document is AI generated. You see, when you want some lore/RP be generated by AI it spits out something that is completely out of place and do not know anything about the server map or any departmental policies. I will not be using any detectors, because they are simply shit, but what you provided in the document is not how humans write RP scenarios/lore, there are many AI musthave phrases in this piece.

I am not leaving - or + support, but you should rethink how you respond to others under your applications and should gather more experience and familiarise yourself with the server more.
Good luck.

Hello, Jack Raider!

Thank you for your feedback. However, I’m a bit confused because I never wrote anything about the server’s maps or anything related. When you mentioned that AI doesn’t know “about the server’s maps or departmental policies,” I’m not sure what you mean, as I didn’t specify anything like that. What I wrote about were the duties of each department (Inspirations from passing applications) and how they all connect to create a more valuable and efficient RP experience. For instance, without the Medical Department, it would be difficult to support personnel during breaches, operations, raids, and general RP situations.

The three examples I provided were simply ideas. I was asked if I could come up with RP scenarios that I’d like to see or create, and I didn’t think there was anything odd about that. Also, it’s not hard to detect AI through a detector. There are several software and websites that can help with that of course, some may have errors, but many are quite efficient, like “ZeroGPT” and “GPTZero.”

 

[Darrel Sparks]

As much as I want to give you a +support it's kind of hard to since the exact same thing that happened during your ECA application seems to be happening again.

Your application is definitely remarkable and you put a lot of effort into the application, I can see that. However, you are repeating what you did before that was apart of the reason to your denial on your Ethics Assistant Application. I'll mention some complaints first
First of all, like you did during the ECA application, you are filling the replies to your application by responding in a negative way to critique and instead of putting it all in one message you reply separately, some times even multiple to the same message. Remember, you can edit messages that you send.

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Now to some of your responses.


You said, "I didn't get denied because of my “less experience.”" and one sentence later you say "they wanted to see me more and for me to get to know how the ECA operates". That is exactly what "less experience" entails. They want you to get to know how ECA operates and that is basically saying that you have "less experience" than what they are looking for.


Yes, it's good that you're getting more active but you can't be applying for SA after just a week of experience. Saying that you just recently started getting active isn't really promising.


This also isn't extremely promising. You're basically saying that you don't have enough experience.

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Outside from your responses, this application was made rather quickly after your ECA application and I can tell that you didn't rush it. You spent a lot of time making sure the application was well made. However, that also tells me that the ECA application was rushed and you most likely only made an attempt at ECA to gain CL4 experience for this application. This could very well just be me accusing you of something that isn't true and if so, I take it back. It just seems very likely that it is the case.

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With all of that said, I really do think you have potential, you just need more experience.
I wish you good luck. Neutral -/+ leaning towards a -support

"Outside from your responses, this application was made rather quickly after your ECA application and I can tell that you didn't rush it. You spent a lot of time making sure the application was well made. However, that also tells me that the ECA application was rushed and you most likely only made an attempt at ECA to gain CL4 experience for this application. This could very well just be me accusing you of something that isn't true and if so, I take it back. It just seems very likely that it is the case."

This part also caught my eye. No I just adapted to the feedback I got, as well as taking inspiration from others, but with a little twist.

 

[Darrel Sparks]

Changed to -Support

How come, if I may ask?

 

["Draco"]

How many times do you have to be reminded to answer to these responses in a bulk.

Its been 10 minutes and you've sent 3 separate messages.

 

[Musician/Kac]

Also, it’s not hard to detect AI through a detector. There are several software and websites that can help with that of course, some may have errors, but many are quite efficient, like “ZeroGPT” and “GPTZero.”

Detectors are bullshit 90% of the time like Jack said in his comment. And you seem like a guy that knows a lot about AI and how to hide it!
The Ideas are also quite bare bones they are essentially a CI DC and D-Class Riot. May i even say the D-Class escape disrupts RP. It ruins the Non-Combative Side of RP something you might not have experienced with only having held Combative Roles in the past. I would also like to ask how you would start such Roleplay? Would you give out Guns to D-Class as an advisor? Do Treason RP to tell CI/GOC to do a D-Block Raid and arm them? Anyway Good Luck on your Application

 

[Darrel Sparks]

Detectors are bullshit 90% of the time like Jack said in his comment. And you seem like a guy that knows a lot about AI and how to hide it!View attachment 19100
The Ideas are also quite bare bones they are essentially a CI DC and D-Class Riot. May i even say the D-Class escape disrupts RP. It ruins the Non-Combative Side of RP something you might not have experienced with only having held Combative Roles in the past. I would also like to ask how you would start such Roleplay? Would you give out Guns to D-Class as an advisor? Do Treason RP to tell CI/GOC to do a D-Block Raid and arm them? Anyway Good Luck on your Application

Not really, it's called past experiences, where you had to check for it.

As well I even disclaimed in the document that those where ideas of scenarios, so what do you mean?

I also find it odd, because you say my ideas are bareboned, I just have a lot of imagination and personally I thought it would be a cool idea?
Everything doesn't need to be related to previous events in the server, I mean that's what role-play is about, no?

Here: That image has no context at all.

 

[Musician/Kac]

Not really, it's called past experiences, where you had to check for it.

Still you could see why im sceptical about your applications. This isn't a one time thing either multiple people called you out for using AI on your ECA too so you having knowledge about stuff like that is rather suspicious in this case. Im not going to continue flodding your application with arguments theres enough of them on here already so consider this my last response

 

[Jack Raider]

Hello, Jack Raider!

Thank you for your feedback. However, I’m a bit confused because I never wrote anything about the server’s maps or anything related. When you mentioned that AI doesn’t know “about the server’s maps or departmental policies,” I’m not sure what you mean, as I didn’t specify anything like that. What I wrote about were the duties of each department (Inspirations from passing applications) and how they all connect to create a more valuable and efficient RP experience. For instance, without the Medical Department, it would be difficult to support personnel during breaches, operations, raids, and general RP situations.

The three examples I provided were simply ideas. I was asked if I could come up with RP scenarios that I’d like to see or create, and I didn’t think there was anything odd about that. Also, it’s not hard to detect AI through a detector. There are several software and websites that can help with that of course, some may have errors, but many are quite efficient, like “ZeroGPT” and “GPTZero.”

That is the whole point, in events like this a regular human would include at least some of the server map places, because that is how you plan certain events and scenarios, but you did not mention any of that, which is exactly how AI would react to your request/the prompt you most likely used to generate that. Look, I am going to be pretty straight forward - do not try to make everyone looks like idiots, because that is what you are trying to do here.
AI generated text is easily distinguishable over a human-written, no detectors needed for that - my time on the server and in documentation all in all created a sort of sense and I can see when the text is not written by a person, which unfortunately yours is not.
There is no need for any detectors, it is visible to the naked eye.

After seeing your most recent response I will be changing my no verdict to a Massive -support
This is the last response from me on this application.

 

[Darrel Sparks]

That is the whole point, in events like this a regular human would include at least some of the server map places, because that is how you plan certain events and scenarios, but you did not mention any of that, which is exactly how AI would react to your request/the prompt you most likely used to generate that. Look, I am going to be pretty straight forward - do not try to make everyone looks like idiots, because that is what you are trying to do here.
AI generated text is easily distinguishable over a human-written, no detectors needed for that - my time on the server and in documentation all in all created a sort of sense and I can see when the text is not written by a person, which unfortunately yours is not.
There is no need for any detectors, it is visible to the naked eye.

After seeing your most recent response I will be changing my no verdict to a Massive -support
This is the last response from me on this application.

I'm sorry, why would I give examples of locations on the map? When it is just a cool idea? Not something that would be implemented? Take another look, it is even disclaimed.

Like what? "Some human", it was examples (ideas to be exact), I thought it was cool, it is not an actual proposal.

 

[Jesse Phil Fring]

I realise this cluttered the chat a lot. So I put it in a spoiler (edit)

Spoiler: yappatron 3000

Not really, it's called past experiences, where you had to check for it.

As well I even disclaimed in the document that those where ideas of scenarios, so what do you mean?

I also find it odd, because you say my ideas are bareboned, I just have a lot of imagination and personally I thought it would be a cool idea?
Everything doesn't need to be related to previous events in the server, I mean that's what role-play is about, no?

Here: That image has no context at all. View attachment 19101View attachment 19102View attachment 19103

These are my DMs so I'd like to add more context to that. This seems to be getting rather out of hand so I will try to be as quick as possible.



First of all you mentioned that ?my reply was AI generated? So I responded and wanted to know what AI detector you had been using and you responded with JustDone. I search it up and scroll down below the actual site and instantly I see reddit of all things and people's experience with it.

https://www.reddit.com/r/ask/comments/1e779zk/how_accurate_is_just_done_ai

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Second of all, when I ran through the same text that I had made but instead through GPT Zero and ZeroGPT it all showed 0% AI and 100% human made text. I then ask you about those to and recommend them to you. That is where the DMs start in your image.

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Lastly,

I'm sorry, why would I give examples of locations on the map? When it is just a cool idea? Not something that would be implemented? Take another look, it is even disclaimed. View attachment 19106

Like what? "Some human", it was examples (ideas to be exact), I thought it was cool, it is not an actual proposal.

"Not something that would be implemented", "just a coold idea". Then why did you use it as RP that you want to do/have done?

I really wasn't intending to write this much. With all that said, good luck.

 

['Athena']

I didn't get denied because of my “less experience.” It was due to they wanted to see me more and for me to get to know how the ECA operates. There is nowhere stated in the requirements that you have to have held a former CL:4.

Thank you either way,

-Darrel Sparks/Darrel Junior

It was that and also the heavy use of AI

-support​

Do not paint yourself better than you are. We're petty people and we remember.

Take some advice from people, get experience, come back later. Go play ISD, get to commissioner. Go get an Assistant job after this. Experience is not a hard thing to grasp as feedback. If you need people to spell that out for you, then it proves the point of you do not have any understanding of how the server works, roleplay hierarchy and progression.

Progression under a fast pace is also something extremely frowned upon. It removes the reward that progression grants.

As well, you need to be able to demonstrate roleplay, either projects or storylines to get this type of position as you'd be becoming an "RP Leader" so maybe try research out first, or ISD operations. It'll help you when in a few months time that you should be applying at.

We dont accept staff with your hours, so why would we give you an influential RP position without experience?

 

[Darrel Sparks]

These are my DMs so I'd like to add more context to that. This seems to be getting rather out of hand so I will try to be as quick as possible.

View attachment 19104

First of all you mentioned that ?my reply was AI generated? So I responded and wanted to know what AI detector you had been using and you responded with JustDone. I search it up and scroll down below the actual site and instantly I see reddit of all things and people's experience with it.

https://www.reddit.com/r/ask/comments/1e779zk/how_accurate_is_just_done_ai

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View attachment 19105

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Second of all, when I ran through the same text that I had made but instead through GPT Zero and ZeroGPT it all showed 0% AI and 100% human made text. I then ask you about those to and recommend them to you. That is where the DMs start in your image.
View attachment 19107

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Lastly,

"Not something that would be implemented", "just a coold idea". Then why did you use it as RP that you want to do/have done?

I really wasn't intending to write this much. With all that said, good luck.

Yeah I tested the text, I even said, "This is a random AI detector" because it popped up on my front page. Then you referred to checking with ZeroGPT? So I usually test, everything I write to make sure of things.

Those where personal ides, he said what type of RP would you like. I gave my ideas, it's not like they would be fully implemented, because that would have to go through-the whole event team/Game Masters.

 

['Athena']

Yeah I tested the text, I even said, "This is a random AI detector" because it popped up on my front page. Then you referred to checking with ZeroGPT? So I usually test, everything I write to make sure of things.

Those where personal ides, he said what type of RP would you like. I gave my ideas, it's not like they would be fully implemented, because that would have to go through-the whole event team/Game Masters.

All i gotta say to this is, if you wrote it, why are you testing it? ​

Its mad when people expose themselves in their own replies​

 

[Zack Baker]

Hey @Darrel Sparks,
I will be leaving a +/- Neutral Support on your application at this current time which is also leaning to a -Support for the following reasons:

• Your application is very detailed and big, hitting the app requirements.
• You are not replying in one big comment but instead separately, again.
• You don't have any prior CL4 experience. Not even Jr. CL4. Try getting a role like GSD CPT (UK, not USA).
  -This isn't a requirement but is something that is usually/often required in this type of application.
• Little previous experience: You only have 3 previous/holding roles which are all CL3 roles. One of which is from USA, not UK.
• Possibly AI generated? Concerns rising.

 

[Darrel Sparks]

All i gotta say to this is, if you wrote it, why are you testing it? ​

Its mad when people expose themselves in their own replies​

I wonder why Athena, maybe so I can have proof via images? Instead of being in a neutral position why not be 1 step ahead, actually why not 2 steps ahead.

I see no problem with being ahead? Maybe because I got multiple responds from others, then I proved that it said 0%-20%, which I specified.
I am sorry, but being plaintive or ready isn't really making things suspicious.

 

[Zack Baker]

(my review)

also, what is your monthly !time?

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The reason on why I am not, doing it in "Bulk", is because new reply's come after I have answered the previous one, so it is kinda hard to write it in bulk, if i can't really see it.

Thank you.

You can edit your message and copy and paste the reply message in the going to be edited message. Easy as that. I just done it here!

 

[Darrel Sparks]

Hey @Darrel Sparks,
I will be leaving a +/- Neutral Support on your application at this current time which is also leaning to a -Support for the following reasons:

• Your application is very detailed and big, hitting the app requirements.
• You are not replying in one big comment but instead separately, again.
• You don't have any prior CL4 experience. Not even Jr. CL4. Try getting a role like GSD CPT (UK, not USA).
  -This isn't a requirement but is something that is usually/often required in this type of application.
• Little previous experience: You only have 3 previous/holding roles which are all CL3 roles. One of which is from USA, not UK.
• Possibly AI generated? Concerns rising.

The reason on why I am not, doing it in "Bulk", is because new reply's come after I have answered the previous one, so it is kinda hard to write it in bulk, if i can't really see it.

Thank you.