[UK] Darrens Global occult coalition application

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Darren

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Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:536990847 Steam ID 3 [U:1:1073981694] Steam ID 64 76561199034247422

Discord name: !!darren Maurader#2724

For how long have you played CN SCP: Since march 1st i have over 2 million seconds since then

Character name(s): Darren Marauder Laurens Darren tate Laurens Darren Laurens

Civilian name: Darren tate Laurens

What server are you applying for: SCPRP-UK

List all whitelisted, MTF, or CI roles that you hold or have held: Chaos insurgency gamma: Holding: Mtf e-11: Held: SCP-096 whitelist: Holding:

What can you bring to the Global Occult Coalition:

My experience and dedication, i have level 20+ on all level trees meaning i have level 3 cl on all jobs in foundation which gives me vast experience in all fields of roleplay being a combat medic researcher gensec rrt sergeant level 30 plus scp playing all scps level 30+ dclass.

I have experience in all trees of rp medical research combat and scp and dclass, i am extremely active and always looking to improve taking peoples problems they had with me and fixing them and actively improving day after day taking peoples -supports and actively taking what they did not like about me and changing to become more well liked in rp and in ooc.

There is also very few people in the server with my experience in all the branches of roleplay, making me suited for all the different jobs that Goc offers including R&D which my researcher experience will greatly help me with R&D combat jobs with my extensive Choas insurgency background which helps me with active combat raiding foundation with my experienced raiding tactics.

Why do you want to join the Global Occult Coalition?:

My main reason is to enhance roleplay, i have met people from goc who are nothing but the most kind and helpful people ever and always increase/enhance rp not only that goc being mainly rp based is appealing to me as unlike ci or nu-7 you can actually sit down with major commanders have peace talks figure out cease fires etc.

All this makes me extremely interested in being a goc, with its high quality rp and experienced people in all fields of rp with experienced researcher medical staff that are usually cl4 and experienced gensec and i would love to be alongside them to ensure high quality ro for pinewood other regiments and fun for people who play the server.

I also like the challenge of working towards something or role, that is hard to get and requires trust and a good reputation which i love the thrill of and excitement and reviewing other peoples opinions on how i could improve in certain aspects

Why was the Global Occult Coalition founded?:

It was founded after the seventh occult War/WW2. They share the Foundation's view of protecting humankind from the million of creatures (or as they call them "parathreats"), though instead of containing or studying them, they destroy/kill or liquadate all parathreats they find, making them a more hostile group and violent group.

After the war, the countries wanted more oversight over the anomalous, and as the SCP foundation which existed back then was a more autonomous organization, and no single country was trusted cause of greed or power to be intrusted with such a mission , the GOC was formed from 108 different and powerful anomalous/occult organizations.

Over the years the GOC has become a major player on the world stage having even more funding than the foundation, and is often seen as the police of the paranormal world the GOC is one of the only things stopping the other paranormal groups from going to war and destroying each other as the fear of the goc keeps them in line due to the GOCS superior funding no group dares to make a move against them and the gocs psyche division keeps relationships smooth between other paranormal groups making them effectively police.

This edit is too add more info the ritual they tried to use was scp-3457 well it was called rite of soloman then changed to 3457 once this ritual was completed they would obtain 7 keys which would give them super human powers the nazis also hoped to manipulate the ritual by allowing only the aryan race to control it during the war 6 keys were recovered the last key was not found the war then turned against germany the scholars constructed another 9 keys and this was successful the resources needed to complete rite of soloman the scp foundation captured and stopped the plan and interogated and learnt information on how to do the ritual which the foundation and the allied Occult initiative used to stop the Obskurakorps from completeing the rite of soloman ritual and finishing the war and causing global domination

What does the Physics, PSYCHE and Ptolemy Divisions specialize in and give an example of some functions they do:

Physics
The physics division is the action arm of the goc made up of assesment teams and strike teams its their job to investigate and capture or neutralize parathreats.

The physics team is instrumental in helping the goc main goal as with no physics teams assessment and strike teams no parathreats would be captured or studied
Psyche
The Psyche division is the diplomacy sector of the goc it consists ambassadors observers that represent the 108 council these personnel maintain relationships between paranormal groups and keep things smooth between normal humanity and the occult. IE diplomacy

The psyche teams main importance comes from stopping all out war with other anomalous groups a war with 10 different anomalous groups would go very bad and cause mass loss of life
Ptolemy
The ptolemy division is known as the support arm and holds quartermasters and the Research and development department this division helps the other divisions do their purpose from managing logistics and resources, to developing guns/weapons and communications for GOC personnel.

The ptolemy group is essential to making the goc work and operate as no guns amnestics or anything used to contain/neutralize parathreats would exist

What are the Global Occult Coalition 's goals?:

Mission one and the most important: Survival
This is the primary directive of the goc to protect humanity from parathreats this is there most important mission and all other missions fall below this as protecting humanity is the gocs main purpose. The entire purpose of the goc is protect humanity
Mission 2: Concealment
Much like the scp foundation the goc seeks to conceal information of parathreats from the public knowledge that could cause mass amounts of panic and human life.
Mission 3: Protection
In an interesting difference from the foundation the goc protects its soldiers and normal every day people they are placed first above everything else while the foundation would dispose of people to contain an anomaly the goc would never do this and instead seeks to protect all human life and their own
Mission 4: Destruction
This mission is the biggest difference between the GOC and the Foundation, and that defines them in many peoples view the foundation would not hesitate to sacrifice an entire town to capture a new anomaly or an escaping scp the goc would instead look at ways to avoid any parathreat from coming into contact with human life and causing any damage and would employ safe tactics to herd the parathreat away from any population center and capture it safely then destroy it in a safe evironment
Mission 5: Education
The Global Occult Coalition wants to expand and learn about every parathreat on the globe this is to keep humanity and their own operatives safe as the best way to defeat you're enemy is to know your enemy when they capture parathreats they study and collect information then destroy the parathreat

Please explain The Seventh Occult War:

The Seventh Occult War, which occurred during World War 2.

The Nazi SS ahnenerbe and the thule-gesselschaft tried to complete a ritual known as the rite of solomon, which would have given them terrifying supernatural power.

They also planned to change this ritual by making it only be abled to be used by the ''Aryan race'' whichwas the perfect master race in their eyes they planned to use 7 keys which would give them unthinkable power and control over the world stage and ensure global domination during the war 6 of the 7 keys were captured making it unable for the nazis to complete the ritual the last key was not recovered or destroyed the nazis and their scholars managed to replicate the keys and made 9 keys once again the world was in danger as if this ritual was completed the world would be under nazi rule.

Before the ritual could be finished the SCP foundation intervened and stopped the plans and during interogation how to use the ritual of soloman was learnt the SCP Foundation and the allied occult initiative used to stop the ritual of soloman being completed and ensured that the nazis would not gain control over the world the war was then finished and the ritual of soloman was renamed scp-3457.

What makes the Global Occult Coalition different in-comparison to the other groups within the SCP-universe in your view?:

Its the fact that the goc actually values human life instead of anomalies the scp foundation would not hesitate to destroy an entire town of innocent people to contain 1 anomaly the goc would never do anything like this.

Instead they would work to neutralize the anomaly before it gets into any sort of town or any place where people live which to me is much more
interesting than the scp foundation which would use a small town to lure the scp to recontain/capture an scp

IC Section:

"Codename here" ''Maurauder''
Serial Number:2312

Real Name: Darren Laurens Ennis

Nationality: Irish

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 22/6/1979

Biographical Information:

Career Service
Darren Laurens was a young man with a great passion for research and biology Darren got good grades in school and lived a reasonably good life studied hard and went to a good college and studied biology and Thaumatology both of which intrigued Darren after finishing college Darrens life went down hill being drafted into the afghanistan war where Darren struggled immensly and almost died on multiple occasions being bad at combat a bomb attack was launched against Darren and his group where Darren became severely injured a soldier came up to him ''Hey you i will not kill a weak and injured man'' *The man handed Darren a machete and signalled him that they were going to fight*

Darren without missing a beat in his heart launched up and charged fueled with anger and adrenaline over the deaths of his comrades and seeing things a lot clearer Darren in a moment of anger overpowered the afghan soldier and chopped his head of in pure anger and rage the other afghan soldiers opened fire on Darren putting round after round into his chest and 1 bullet going through his head Darren lay motionless on the ground a few american soldiers heard the conflict and came to rescue him.

Darren with some miracle managed to survive the ordeal although it would come at a cost his life would be severely shortened due to the injuries he sustained a doctor came up to Darren ''Look you are lucky to be alive right now by some miracle every bullet that hit you hit a non vital place of you're body including your head the bullet missed you're spinal cord by less than a few centimetres'' Darren stunned by this immediately asked where is his next deployment Darrens doctor informed Darren that he was Honourably Discharged from the army and was being sent back home.

Before The Goc
After being discharged from the army Darren was happy but also very sad he would never see some of the friends he made and has survivors guilt of surviving when everyone else died or some lucky few that escaped feeling tremendous guilt Darren attended many months of therapy and sought purpose in life joining many biology firms and being extremely gifted and talented Darren also worked on thaumatology in his free time and finding a great interest in thaumatology lead it to be a passion project alongside Darrens work at a biology company and believing Darrens survival in afghanistan had something to do with thaumatology and became obsessed studying every last information he could find on thaumatology studying everything and learning every last piece of information Darren could and becoming well versed in thaumatology and biology studying every piece of information he could Darren left his job to pursue his passion and Dreams eventually joining the United Nations and eventually the Global Occult Coalition wanting to pursue his passion and not end up utterly helpless in the face of a threat and save the world.



Career Service Vitae:

Private First Class of the US army

Director of biology:
 
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to those that inevidently bring up my past although you are true i cannot change it no matter how much i wish it will not happen but i can change the present i am serious about rp and i hope i can be trusted with this position as i have matured quite alot
 
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Darren, I don't mind you as a person but I don't think you're fit for GOC. You're argumentative and tend to get annoyed when things dont go your way. Not only that, you also blatantly dont care for RP. I'll bring up an argument you talked about with me where you died after being liquidated as SCP-966 and you used the excuse that because thats not something implemented in game, clearly its impossible to RP. Your unknowledge of SCP lore and your backstory is questionable at the least.
 
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Darren, I don't mind you as a person but I don't think you're fit for GOC. You're argumentative and tend to get annoyed when things dont go your way. Not only that, you also blatantly dont care for RP. I'll bring up an argument you talked about with me where you died after being liquidated as SCP-966 and you used the excuse that because thats not something implemented in game, clearly its impossible to RP. Your unknowledge of SCP lore and your backstory is questionable at the least.
argumentive only in some cases also the 966 part which is the main one you mentioned goc shot a matador at me then slayed me and called it ''rp'' imo it was not since that can ruin an scps breach example im 049 is not invicible in scp cannon i shoot a matador at him then slay him since in canon scp 049 can die you see where im going the goc had no rp with me when i was captured they did not sell rp or test they shot a rocked launcher then slayed me also i do quite care for rp if i did not i would not make this app the goc which is primarily an rp organisation when captured an scp instead of studying shot a matador at 966 then got staff to slay there is no rp in that and it actually ruins immersion but i do understand you're opinion.

I also avoid arguments as much as possible i should add but i expected a rp focused faction to do more then step 1 grab matador step 2 shoot matador as 966 step 3 call staff get 966 slayed.

Also this server does not follow scp cannon that much example dclass have a dblock in scp canon there is none and they are locked in cells the server changes canon to suit rp better.

Also i feel i should add another thing i do my best to avoid arguments but most of the time i have no control another example a brainwashed agent entered the facility they were brainwashed as a ci operative im a ci delta when ordered the agent refused to come back so i was forced to call a sit i can do plenty of rp and enjoy it another example lead a ci raid today and hosted a tryout when the delcom left the server none of which i would of done if i ''Hated rp'' and had ''no care for rp'' i get that most of you're interactions have been in sits that i have made and not in a rp environment but i hope this explained it better.

Also being annoyed easily im not it takes alot to send me over the rails usually i am in the right today a gensec captain i killed 2 times then the captain made a code 1 and id checked us and ruined the dc the captain got out of it by saying a few minutes ago a ci raid happened which although was true the raid never got past the main gates and failed this got the captain out of metgaming and nlr and ruined a dc when i had a cl4 card
 
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Hey Darren, I will be giving this application a Neutral support.
My decision is made up because of the following points

Positives:
- You're very active, which is amazing for GOC because there regiment isnt that big.

- You are a mayor roleplayer which suits GOC perfectly.

- Despite your past you have made a decent effort to make your reputation better.

Negatives:
- As Jason has stated, you can be really intense at times. This might be due to the fact that you are passionate about the server and roleplaying in general but it might be a bit too overboard.
This is also based on your forum activity. (Posts, replies, appeals etc.

- Your application, why GOC has been founded, to be exact has been copied straight from fandom.com without changing the text which gives off a feeling of not putting in effort on your application.

- Your punctuation and grammatical skills are not really up to standard, especially for GOC. Your applications and ingame communications can be hard to read because there are no periods, question mark, exclamation point or comma's used.

I wish you the best of luck with getting this GOC whitelist my guy!
 
Hey Darren, I will be giving this application a Neutral support.
My decision is made up because of the following points

Positives:
- You're very active, which is amazing for GOC because there regiment isnt that big.

- You are a mayor roleplayer which suits GOC perfectly.

- Despite your past you have made a decent effort to make your reputation better.

Negatives:
- As Jason has stated, you can be really intense at times. This might be due to the fact that you are passionate about the server and roleplaying in general but it might be a bit too overboard.
This is also based on your forum activity. (Posts, replies, appeals etc.

- Your application, why GOC has been founded, to be exact has been copied straight from fandom.com without changing the text which gives off a feeling of not putting in effort on your application.

- Your punctuation and grammatical skills are not really up to standard, especially for GOC. Your applications and ingame communications can be hard to read because there are no periods, question mark, exclamation point or comma's used.

I wish you the best of luck with getting this GOC whitelist my guy!
i didnt copy it from fandom. com i know very little about goc so i used the basics from what i know and my grammar and punctuation so i use apps to help me that add the grammar and commas for me instead of myself.

when making the application i used the basic knowledge i had of the goc and the grammar is cause i have program that does it for me my grammar skills are incredibly basic
 
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Absolutely not please just no
-very immature
-shouts at any opportunity
-has some sort of anger issues
-breaks more rules than what he complains about
GOC is amazing and I personally think that all Darren would do is make them look like a joke. I want to be kind to you Darren but it’s so very hard to do

Edit: whenever something doesn’t go your way, your response is to just call a sit
 
-support
Absolutely not please just no
-very immature
-shouts at any opportunity
-has some sort of anger issues
-breaks more rules than what he complains about
GOC is amazing and I personally think that all Darren would do is make them look like a joke. I want to be kind to you Darren but it’s so very hard to do

Edit: whenever something doesn’t go your way, your response is to just call a sit
that isnt it i call sits when i feel i get metagamed which happens a lot and alot today i got arrested 2 times as ci deepcover cause a mr happened 30 minutes ago and the captain is ''checking ids'' even though he clearly knows im a ci due to me killing him 2 times and a com breaking fearp getting stuck on a tesla gate to avoid being caught
 
+- Neutural
+ Active
+ Has made some efforts to fix his past (getting to CI-D proves this a little)


- Meantioned above I don't think i have to specify

Wish you luck on the application tho!
 
i didnt copy it from fandom. com i know very little about goc so i used the basics from what i know and my grammar and punctuation so i use apps to help me that add the grammar and commas for me instead of myself.

when making the application i used the basic knowledge i had of the goc and the grammar is cause i have program that does it for me my grammar skills are incredibly basic
I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt, but, i have checked again and the sentences are exactly the same as on GOC fandom page.

The following parts are copied right from your application:
After the war, the countries wanted more oversight over the anomalous, and as the SCP Foundation (which already existed back
Over the years the GOC has become a major player on the world stage, having even more funding than the foundation, and is often seen as the "police of the paranormal world
If we take a look at the fandom page (listed below) these parts match perfectly with the search function CTRL+F

I thought there were more parts that matched perfectly but you might have changed them.
As i've seen your replies in this thread to people who give your there +,- or neutral support. I can conclude that you cant take any criticism nor can you reflect on your own personal actions.
My neutral support will be moving towards a -support.
This will be my final response.

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I dont buy it that you have a program helping you with grammar/punctuation, if you have it please use it on your whole application and responses instead of certain parts in your application only.
If you indeed have a program for it please use it on everything you do on the forum, this will make you seem more mature aswell because your last complaint (30 minutes ago at the time of writing this) has bad punctuation aswell.
If you copied things you can just admit you copied, this shows you are mature enough and can reflect on your own actions.
 
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I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt, but, i have checked again and the sentences are exactly the same as on GOC fandom page.

The following parts are copied right from your application:


If we take a look at the fandom page (listed below) these parts match perfectly with the search function CTRL+F


I thought there were more parts that matched perfectly but you might have changed them.
As i've seen your replies in this thread to people who give your there +,- or neutral support. I can conclude that you cant take any criticism nor can you reflect on your own personal actions.
My neutral support will be moving towards a -support.
This will be my final response.

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I dont buy it that you have a program helping you with grammar/punctuation, if you have it please use it on your whole application and responses instead of certain parts in your application only.
If you indeed have a program for it please use it on everything you do on the forum, this will make you seem more mature aswell because your last complaint (30 minutes ago at the time of writing this) has bad punctuation aswell.
If you copied things you can just admit you copied, this shows you are mature enough and can reflect on your own actions.
i can send proof of the program that i use the reason i only reply to neutrals or -supports what would i say? replying to -supports or neutrals i get to actual respond. and as stated before im not a expert on goc canon so i just use the basics that i know.

Edit just checked the thing you mentioned i can see a few things that are very similar i can agree but i can tell you this was not my intention since most of my knowledge of the goc comes from forums when writing this application and thinking about what to put i most likely though of some of these and unconsciously wrote similar things due to you being right i will be deleting this application if you wish me to just tell me as i can tell you this was not on purpose
 
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<OOC Feedback>

Hello, Avery here.

Normally your application would've have been rejected. However, GOC High Command has released an unofficial guide to helping applicants getting accepted into GOC.

Instead, you are being given a chance to re-write your application. In line with the standards set within the writing guide. As well as, I will be giving some personal feedback.


Personal Feedback: You do make mention of 323. However, we would like to see something outside the server. If you follow the writing guide. You should hopefully find an interesting topic that you could spend an hour reading into.

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I would also really advise this guide for writing characters.
 
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<OOC Feedback>

Hello, Avery here.

Normally your application would've have been rejected. However, GOC High Command has released an unofficial guide to helping applicants getting accepted into GOC.

Instead, you are being given a chance to re-write your application. In line with the standards set within the writing guide. As well as, I will be giving some personal feedback.


Personal Feedback: You do make mention of 323. However, we would like to see something outside the server. If you follow the writing guide. You should hopefully find an interesting topic that you could spend an hour reading into.

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I would also really advise this guide for writing characters.
Ok just rewrited the entire in character section was i supposed to rewrite all of it or just just the in character section if yes i will get to work and rewrite the entire application from start to bottom including goc lore if needed @Avery Winters

i could of done better including going into more depth about thaumatology and what it is but i hope you can see my dedication to wanting to be in the goc
 
hi -support

you call a sit everytime something doesn't go your way which shows how immature you are

you got exec which is a plus i guess??

also reading other replies concludes this reply with a big -support

sorry darren ?
i rarely call sits anymore so its not clearly everytime this is a big exaggeration logs should prove this
 
someone gave you a pen and paper during interrogation so you wouldnt be ungagged
imo pen and paper is power gaming the reason you cant take off the gag is cause you are restrained right but you can write a full sentence and paragraphs?
 
imo pen and paper is power gaming the reason you cant take off the gag is cause you are restrained right but you can write a full sentence and paragraphs?
yeah???? because the gag is a seperate object from the cuffs??
gag goes around the back of your head and into your mouth (rope)
cuffs are like real life handcuffs, except with a leash attached and an elastic chain instead
if theyre stretchy it isnt unrealistic for you to be able to write with a pen while they're on
in real life you can literally write perfectly fine with handcuffs on
 
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