[UK] Hans 'Table' Dierder's Game Master Application

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Hans 'Table' Dierder's Game Master Application

NOTICE: From the 19th, I'will be on LOA until the 30th of October, VTime will be lower than usual. Will still be around on TS and Discord.

Basic Information

Original Steam Account Name:
mrwilliamo_2323

How long have you played on CG SCP-RP:
I've been actively playing SCP-RP since June 2023. During this time I have in total just shy of 360 hours.
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Age:
19 Years Old

In what country are you located?:
England, United Kingdom

Time zone:
BST (GMT+1)

Foundation Name:
Assistant/Agency Manager Hans Dierder
MTF O-1 SGT ‘Table’

Chaos name:
CI-A ‘Window’

Civilian name:
Harry

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:0:130815742

Discord:
harryflynndev (614864917413101580)

Do you have a mic?:
I do indeed.

What server are you applying for?:
SCP-RP UK

Is this the first application you've made?
Yes, I have yet to submit a Game Master Application. Although I have applied for many whitelisted roles inside the community such as Ethics Committee Assistant, Special Agent and SCP-096 Whitelist - all of which have been successful.

Have you received any kicks/bans/warnings?:
Fear RP - 13th August 2023

Previous Experience

Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community?:
I do not currently possess any experience as a Game Master in other communities. However, I have assisted with the running of events inside Civil Networks SCP-RP for a couple of months - such as roleplaying event characters with custom PAC3 models, furthering the existing event storyline and ensuring that it is enjoyable for all players on the server.

An example of me assisting other Game Masters is when I helped Napolean run an event where Nu-7 and DEA raided a night club where we (the hostiles) were holding the owners of the club hostage. I was in charge of interacting with world props and blowing up a wall which exposed us to Nu-7 which allowed them to get the advantage they needed to take us out and successfully rescue the hostage.

I’ve also assisted Athena in creating combat maps for use on the server. I was approached as she knew about my building experience and asked if I could recreate some maps from the game CS:GO. I happily obliged and asked for the GM restraints in terms of prop limits etc, and helped build sections of it on my own single-player server.

Do you have any previous experience with serious roleplay?:
I do indeed have a vast array of experience with serious roleplay. I spent most of 2019-2022 involved in serious RP servers on various games, including FiveM (GTA V Modification Framework) and Arma 3. Inside FiveM I have around 1500 hours in Whitelisted Role Play Communities (RPCs) mainly revolving around the British Police Force.

These servers would have daily patrols spanning for 2-3 hours of straight, serious roleplay where you were not to break character at any time. We used real British Policing documents and knowledge to ensure we were serious and realistic. One of the storylines that I helped create as a Civillain Character which I am most proud of was one that spanned several real-time weeks and was about a young teenager who was groomed into becoming a gang member inside of London.

I roleplayed out calls (roleplay scenes) where my character started getting seen doing small, relatively innocent things like shoplifting, until one day when he was mistreated by a police officer who was not having a good day. This storyline rapidly adapted to how other people interacted with me. To the point where my character had a deep hatred of the Metropolitan Police which then led to him being a part of a targeted hit assigned to him by that gang on a Detective Sergeant who arrested one of the gang members.

On top of this, I previously ran the biggest Realistic Flight Simulator on FiveM, I was one of the main people who recruited real-life Air Traffic Controllers to ensure that every aspect of the server was realistic and serious. Ensuring roleplay remains serious was a huge part of this, which allowed me to this day to create serious and enjoyable roleplay for people.

Other Questions

How many hours can you be on every day?:
In terms of actual hours on the server, at the moment it is about 6 hours minimum per day (may be less as of recently due to being away), although this time is split up between DoEA, Omega-1 and Ethics Assistant. I also do a lot of stuff for these roles out of the server such as writing and creating documentation, leading meetings and other stuff.

With regards to how many hours I can be running/assisting with events every day, I would be able to dedicate at least of those minimum 6 hours a day to it. The reason I am able to dedicate this much time is due to me working from home and having a lot of free time during work at the moment and then continuing to play after this.

Why do you want to become a Gamemaster on our server?:
Well, there are a multitude of reasons that I’m applying to become a Game Master today, but at the forefront of all of them is that I have a true desire to create fun events for every community member. I want people, no matter what role they play inside the foundation, to be included. Fun Events can break up some of the day-to-day annoyances that are simply unavoidable, such as being RDM’d or having bad roleplay interactions; hosting these events can brighten up someone's day and restore the enjoyment for the server they had before getting upset.

As you may have noticed so far in my application, I really enjoy storytelling. Creating unique storylines is by far one of my favourite things to do in roleplay and whilst being in the server I have done my best to do this with the positions I am currently in, but I believe that if I were accepted to become a Game Master, that I would be able to push towards new limits of what is possible in terms of Garry’s Mod roleplay.

Another reason I’d like to become a Game Master is because I really want to encourage roleplay interactions. Some days on site there is just simply a lack of meaningful roleplay between certain elements of the server. I want to create events where EVERYONE has to work together and really encourage people, even after an event has finished to work and enjoy roleplay together instead of having limited interactions. Such as Tech Experts being seen as people who have no intent to roleplay, when a lot of the time now that may not be the case. Encouraging these roles to work together will help them see that everyone at the end of the day, is on the server to create meaningful roleplay, they just may not have been given the tools yet.

Lastly, I gain great enjoyment and happiness seeing people enjoy and interact with the events that I create and assist others in running. Simply knowing that I have possibly brightened up their day and put a smile on their face is the most rewarding part of being a Game Master and is probably my main reason for applying.

What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants?:
One of the things I believe will be extremely useful for the GM Team is my experience with building inside of Garry’s Mod, this is due to me having thousands of hours playing DarkRP servers and with this, you need to know how to build to create an effective base, on top of this I have built many commercial/roleplay type buildings and scenes for businesses and general roleplay enhancements. I would love to assist in building event maps and even help other GMs who may not be confident in building all the little tips and tricks I have picked up over the years.

Something I think that sets me apart from other applicants is that I have a passion for storytelling. I enjoy coming up with events and stories in my own mind wherever I may be at the time and then materializing them into something other people can experience and thoroughly enjoy, an example of this is my character Hans Dierder’s Lore.

I’d like to also believe that I work well in a team, which will allow me to slot right into the GM Team and begin working with others to create my own storylines and events that they would be able to assist in. I would also love to inspire and help other GMs to work on their own ideas and ensure they do the best roleplay they can.

Reacting quickly and efficiently to rapidly changing events is something I take pride in, knowing I am able to keep everything under control even if the worst-case scenario happens, this means to me that if I was hosting an event and something did not go as planned or we had strayed from my original event/storyline plan, that I would be able to ensure that the roleplay flow could continue without seeming broken to the players. I do this by planning out every possibility and having backup plans when doing the original groundwork for an event.

Events

Please List 3 small event ideas (Which would involve at least one side of the server):
"Overlord"

This small event will be based on the SCP Tale “Overlord”, I believe that bringing this to the server as a small event would create amazing roleplay for anyone involved.

The event would work as follows: I will create a house on GM Plane that would be spawned onto a part of the map near the GOC base. It will need 2-3 Game Masters to ensure the event works well, they will play the role of Sarkic Cultits. It will also make use of GM Objectives that describe items in the house such as the camera used to visualise the cultists.

The main objective for this event will be for the UNGOC to investigate and clear out this house of cultists and ensure no civilians in Pinewood are attacked by this group of cannibals. Inside the house, there will be GM Objectives that they would have to “capture” and take back to the UNGOC which will allow for follow-up roleplay scenes to be created.

The reason the UNGOC are going to be the first responders to this is that in lore they are the ones who would deal with Sarkic’s.

“The Escape Room”
This event would be an escape room challenge for the regiment Epsilon-11. We will approach E-11 as MTF Command and instruct them that they have been chosen to complete an escape room created by the foundation. They would be asked to go up to the garage and then blindfolded and teleported to GM Plane where the containment chamber I had built would be. I would need one other game master for this who would assist me in providing hints when needed and for the transporting of E-11 to the GM Plane. Clues will be placed around the room with text screens and GM Objectives.

The escape room would be a high-tech environment filled with computer terminals, screens, and ominous red lighting. E-11 is initially locked inside, and they must find a way to disable SCP-079's control and unlock the main door.

They will be split into teams of 4 to complete this and multiple instances of the escape room would exist at once. It would be a race to see who completes it first. The escape room will be based around SCP-079 - one of the main SCPs they ensure stays contained - and will have to solve different puzzles and challenges to get hints/clues in order to get to the next area and escape. They will have a time limit and if it runs out cognito hazards intended to kill them would be deployed. All of this would be happening whilst 079's ominous robotic voice taunts them.

There would be a full briefing given to each team with lore, as you would an actual escape room but the gist is that SCP-079 has breached containment and has taken control of the foundation control systems.

“Bootcamp”
Chaos Insurgency High Command send out a communication to the Pinewood CI Cell and tell them they are not happy with the current numbers inside the cell and are requesting that they begin a campaign to indoctrinate the people in Pinewood into joining the Chaos Insurgency by using propaganda. They inform the command that they will need to create an indoctrination program where they expose what the world is really like, how CI are saving the day and remove the veil of secrecy the foundation holds. They will be given 24-48 hours notice until High Command arrives to see their progress.

They also mention that there will be a trial of the new Virtual Reality hardware they’ve been working on in the R&D department. It will simulate a boot camp training area that they want to make people wear when undergoing this program.

Chaos Insurgency is told that if someone does not willing want to try this new program out, they must kidnap them, inject them with chemicals, strap them down in a chair and place the VR headset on them.

There will be a delivery of the headsets that will be brought in shortly after the arrival of the High Command that other members of the cell will have to carry inside of the base.

For this event, I will build a training ground and arena on GM Plane which they will be brought to. I will need 2 other Game Masters to act as High Command members who will assist me in talking to the Commanders, organizing the propaganda campaign whilst supervising the CI Base, Surface Zone and GM Plane.

Map Change

Please List a Map change event idea (Involving both sides and the entire server)
"Relocation"

Following a rise in containment failures inside of Site-65, the Overseer Council gathered and discussed creating a new Site. This site would be farther away from civilization, to avoid any more pinewood information breaches, get away from the Chaos Insurgency and be freed from the watchful eye of the UNGOC. This new site has the latest and greatest technology for containment chambers, meaning breaches will become a lot less frequent, if at all.

After years of work, it has come time for the SCPs who reside at Site-65 to be transferred to this new place. Knowing this is a huge task, the foundation reached out to the UNGOC for assistance during this escort. The UNGOC reluctantly agree to assist as they recognized that a breach during relocation would be catastrophic.

The Chaos Insurgency slowly catch on to the fact that fewer personnel are arriving at Site-65 as they are all settling into the new site. Knowing something is wrong they start planning an ambush to steal the SCPs that are going to be transported.

The map change would be to a Canadian forest which would include a place to end the escort. The escort will be forced to drive slow to ensure the event lasts longer, under the ruling that if they drive too fast it could damage the containment measures they have in place whilst transporting, which gives an opportunity for roleplay to happen between all factions, as well as some combat.

Once they arrive at the new site, the foundation will have to secure it and ensure the Insurgency is nowhere in sight to start getting the SCPs inside the facility. At this point they will either have had a successful escort and all SCPs arrive, or a partial success where SCPs have been captured and secured by the insurgency.

Here is a list of objectives for each faction:

Foundation:
Ensure the escort arrives at the new site without any loss of SCPs or Personnel.
Protect any and all vital information/documentation that is being transferred with the escort.
Protect the SCPs from being captured by the Chaos Insurgency.
On arrival to the site they must secure it, set up a perimeter and ensure there are no CI in the area.

Chaos Insurgency:
Intercept the Foundation Convoy.
Capture any and all SCPs that are in the escort.
Create chaos by causing anomalies to occur during the escort to distract the Foundation resources.
Capture Photos of the Escort to remove the veil of secrecy.
(Optional) Attempt to get work with them to take the SCPs for themselves.

UNGOC:
Protect the Foundation Convoy from being discovered by civillians.
Neutralize the Chaos Insurgency Ambush to avoid an SCP Breach.
Maintain Order.

Event Conclusion:

The outcome of the event involves the successful or partially successful relocation of SCPs and Documents to this new site. The level of success for each faction may vary depending on actions and decisions made in RP. This event creates a dynamic roleplay experience with a unique story and the potential to create or change future events in server lore.

Regimental Missions

List an example mission for each of the following:
Omega-1:

One of the embedded members of the Ethics Committee has arrived at Site-65, although this was not meant to be their final destination. The Ethics Member has assumed the position of an Nu-7 Enlisted and is hiding out on surface. The Chaos Insurgency have got wind that this is all happening and are trying to kidnap this ECM for information. It is O-1s job to report to surface immediately to get this ECM to safety and prepare for them to be removed from Site-65. Mission is a success if ECM is picked up from site within 12 minutes of the distress call. If they do not, Chaos Insurgency will get a ping of their live location every 30 seconds. The reason they will get a ping is because they had their tech experts hacking devices in Pinewood to try and find the ECM. Omega-1 must deal with this quickly to prevent info breaches and to protect the committee.

Alpha-1:
Recently a shipment has come in from one of the usual suppliers of facility goods. Although one of these boxes looks out of the ordinary. Somehow, it managed to get past security checkpoints and has ended up in the Personnel Wing Kitchen. After a lowly chef opens up his normal delivery, he notices what looks to be a large improvised explosive device with a note that says “With Love, The Insurgency.” Their job is to report to the area, evacuate PW and try to diffuse the bomb. They have 15 minutes to do this or the bomb will explode, killing A-1 members and causing damage to the facility.

Nu-7:
Nu-7 communication systems light up red with distress alerts about a surface anomaly, although… this isnt a simple 323 or 8854 breach. An unrecognized SCP has breached nearby a city and it is their job to ensure the safety of civilians in the area before it makes it way there. The SCP will be Dutch’s (SGM) huge spider PAC3 with the SCP job. A GM Map will be built on plane and Nu-7 will be teleported to it after a briefing from the Nu-7 COs and they will explore the area to find the SCP. Mission success if they successfully do enough damage to it in under 15 minutes from the time they find the SCP, they will restrain it and bring it back to foundation where E-11 will meet them to take it to HCZ. Mission fails if they do not terminate or restrain the SCP in the time frame.

Epsilon-11:
Whispers float around Heavy Containment Zone after the body of an E-11 SPC is discovered in a supply closet by a Tech Expert who was being escorted by Epsilon-11. The area is instantly closed off and an investigation is launched into finding the cause of death. Was it an anomaly? Was it a person? Their job is to follow clues set around HCZ in order to find the answer. All whilst being stalked by a mysterious figure. Mission success if in under 30 minutes they can figure out who did it and have them detained/terminated. Mission fail is they do not figure out who it was in the time frame, all clues will have been cleaned up by the killer and they will flee the facility.

Chaos Insurgency:
High Command inform the Pinewood Chaos Cell that a member up top has been captured on their way to visit them and are being held in the UNGOC compound. They believe the UNGOC will interrogate them to find out information about other cells all over the world, leading to the fall of the insurgency. They must lead a raid on the GOC base before it is too late. Mission success if they can secretly make entry to the base and retrieve the Command Member, partial success if they go in and shoot their way through which could possibly lead to the UNGOC killing the command member. Mission fails if they do not do either within 40 minutes.

UNGOC:
The UNGOC have been made aware of a food shortage all over the area. Their job is to recruit civillians in Pinewood and go on a mass cook/food drive, gathering as much food as they can and sharing it out between the citizens of pinewood, personnel of the Foundation and the members of the Chaos Insurgency in an attempt to improve relations with the GOIs. There is no mission success or loss, this is simply a fun roleplay event to improve relations and enjoy some peaceful time in the server.

Foundation Staff:
The SCP Foundation has voted in favour of deeming Site-65 the best performing site of Q3 2023, due to the hard work being put in, all personnel with clearance one or higher has been invited to a pizza party inside Floor 2 Cafeteria. There will be speeches from Site Administration thanking everyone for their hard work which will IC and OOC motivate people to keep doing well and know their work is appreciated on the server. Everyone will be able to interact and have a talk, without the rush of the foundation ruining anything. No Objective, strictly roleplay event inside foundation.​
 
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harryflynndev

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This application is really good though I'm not certain of your activity (I don't play Foundation though so it's expected)
Hey! Thank you for the support, I'll attach my vtime below! I'd like to note that in the past month I have been on holiday and with family so I will have some red spots :D

EDIT: thank you for revising your support

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Hello Hans,
While your application is one of the more detailed and well formatted ones i have seen, there are concerns i have with it that prevent me from being able to support it.
Starting with the Three large events.

"Overlord", the base idea of a UNGOC raid on an anomalous group is solid, though im unsure how your current idea for the setup would go, as it would likely be a very short affair of the two Nälka being overwhelmed within seconds and gunned down, before the house is picked clean in a matter of 5 minutes by the GOC, and promptly bombed.

Perhaps go into more detail how you predict the event to play out and what your intentions are.

"The Escape Room", the main issue i see with this is creation of compelling puzzles and how to even accomodate the sheer quantity of players, id imagine an escape room to work well with 1-5 players, but much more than this number of MTF turn up at announced trainings, or would hop on once they got wind something was happening.

If you are able to, please detail some of the puzzles youd intend to fill the room with and how you would deal with accomodating many players in such an environment.

"Bootcamp", this event i am incredibly uncertain about, largely because it would mostly just invite mingery of civilians declaring themselves members of CI and then failraiding foundation or going on an MRDM spree. Nor am i certain what your plans were with "propaganda" or with talking to the commanders.

What i presume to be your intention: CI would be mass abducting civilians, they would be taken to a "dupe", where additional GM characters or CI members would be putting them through a training course and a "history lesson" about how important CI is.

I see a handfull of issues with this: A. You will not be available 24/7 for those Two days, Giving CI a limited timeframe where they can do their thing, this is fine if you aknowledge and build around it, but the mention or the arbitrary 48 hours thing throws me off of you being aware of this.

B. The practicality of making a compelling boot camp, ultimatly you have not gone into detail how the boot camp would work, and this fact could very well make or break your Event, perhaps elaborate on this.

Now, Onto the Map Change

firstly, though you are not alone in doing this, i myself also made this mistake in my application (as do most applicants) you have not actually specified a map which the server would be changed to, which is why it is called a Map-Change.

Secondly, the event you are describing would effectively be a very Dry 2v1 TDM match on a new map.

Map changes displace the entire server, different from most events
A big part of map changes is the fact that while the mapchange is ongoing, that is ALL that is happening, the usual gameplay loops of everyone, from dclass to researcher are disrupted and replaced with whatever has been set up in the map change, and i do not believe this TDM is adequate for this, especially without any notable accomodation for noncombative roleplay.

I simply do not think the idea in this current iteration would be compelling, which is a very pressing issue when this event would be actively replacing everything else on the server.


The Regimental Missions
Omega-1: While the idea of an extraction mission is good, this current iteration is impractical and could easilly be toppled, (what if CI randomly finds the "Nu7" and guns him down?) also instead of an Actual Committee member, why not have the embedded individual be an informant, which would make a lot more sense for the comittee to do.

Alpha-1: There is notable precedent of bomb defusal events and or tranings, this is good.

Nu-7: this one i take issue with, while it is common and good for GMs to help one another out and to re-use old PAC3s or the likes, i think it is a bit presumptuous to assume one would 100% be able to rely on another GM to do this for oneself.
That aside, this is
YOUR application wherein you are intended to put your best foot forward and show us what YOU can do and why you would be a good fit for our GM team, and i do not think "I will put another GMs SCP PAC3 into a dupe i made and tell nu7 to grab it" is you doing that.
For your application, please remember that this is you convincing us that you are a worthwhile addition to the GM team.

E-11: The Event description is far too vague, please go into more detail on how you would be running this.

CI: a very basic raid setup, though depending on GOC numbers, stealth is very unlikely to work, mostly fine.

UNGOC: the GOC has done things a lot like that in the past, with notable success. Not incredibly interesting but a fine small roleplay enhancement.

Foundation Staff: My only concern is that While F2 Cafeteria is a spacious room (one of the most spacious social areas on the map even) it is a bit far from peoples spawns and locked behind CL2 doors, which would dampen accessibility for this event, which you probably want to be as accessible as possible, Perhaps relocate it to the Core Sector Research hall, which is going severely underused. Good idea otherwise.

As one last thing, something I personally look for in GM applications is for the applicant to demonstrate a notable familiarity with the SCP Universe beyond the content obviously featured on the server.
This could take the shape of mentioning an Obscure GOI or Concept, while also demonstrating that you understand their function and place in the SCP universe, such a demonstration is absent from your application.

In short: Several practical concerns about "how" the events will be done, with other middling concerns.
 

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Hi @MrSiens,

Thank you for taking the time to formulate a detailed response to my application.

I'd like to add some notes that I believe you have missed. I will also be going through and making edits based on some of the notes you've provided.

id imagine an escape room to work well with 1-5 players
"They will be split into teams of 4 to complete this and multiple instances of the escape room would exist at once."

I personally look for in GM applications is for the applicant to demonstrate a notable familiarity with the SCP Universe
I do spend a good amount of time looking through the SCP wiki and reading up on lore with interest in unique and lesser-known GOIs, but for these events, I'd wish to have them be bigger than small events and would work on these if I were to be accepted onto the team.

That aside, this is YOUR application wherein you are intended to put your best foot forward and show us what YOU can do
The reason I included this was to demonstrate that I am able to work with others, I understand why you may see this as me not relying on myself to make a PAC3, but I spoke to Dutch before creating this asking if it would be alright. I think it would be good to further use an SCP that is already known by many of the foundation personnel for this mission instead of something random.

firstly, though you are not alone in doing this, i myself also made this mistake in my application (as do most applicants) you have not actually specified a map which the server would be changed to, which is why it is called a Map-Change.
I've realized now that I forgot to add a hyperlink to the map I was suggesting, I will add this later.

I will be addressing the rest of these later tonight when I refactor my application.

I'd like to thank you again for your extensive response.

- Hans
 
Hello @harryflynndev I will be giving you a +Support on your application. There are some bits that will need adjusting to make this an even better application. I'll explain below what your strengths are and the weaknesses.

Firstly we'll touch on the strengths:
- You show quite a bit of creativity with thinking outside the box. This in my opinion is quite valuable in the GM team to prevent a repeated event theme and give the players something new to enjoy.
- Your events have a fun atmosphere to it. They seem engaging and I do think you'd do well within that scenario.
- Your formatting is excellent. This was easy to read and not a skittles explosion.
- You go into detail in each section which is great to see and shows commitment.

Now we'll look at the weaknesses:
- The map change event isn't terrible, but I cannot blame someone who hasn't seen an SCP map change being done as we've not done them to the frequency of the MRP Server. That being said, what we ideally look for in a map change is something that can engage players for about 2-3 hours and has various avenues of roleplay. It isn't a bad idea what you've put down, but with the information I've supplied I do believe you should take another look at it.
- The Nu-7 event needs to be something a bit more unique. Rushing out to do *another* surface SCP type event can be a bit boring as that's something they'd do on a regular occasion.

Overall, I am impressed with what you've done so far and I would be happy enough to see you on the Game Master team. I do wish you the best of luck with the rest of the application process.
 

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- Active
-Creates RP
-Has helped in past events


From my time with Harry in DEA, he has shown nothing but greatness; he creates a variety of RP situations that have a positive impact, and he has insane writing skills and immense knowledge of the SCP universe. And his application is one of the best I have ever seen. The format and depth are just amazing. This was a joy to read through. And currently, I feel Harry is one of the best picks for game masters.
 
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- Creates a large amount of RP within Foundation
- Detailed application, spent nearly 7+ hours writing it
- Decent event ideas
- Decent attempt at the map change event section (not seen a single one happen on the SCP server since joining almost a year ago, so harry has given it a good crack here)
- Has the support and backing of multiple SGM's, can be mentored and shaped into the perfect GM for the SCP server


What more do you want from a man?
 
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Harry has an immense amount of experience with building and such within garry's mod and taught me how to build which has immensely helped me create dupes for events now, and not just do events centering around pac3. As well, he has happily assisted with Broda's spooky season storyline, and assisted in building my training dupes.

I think this application is well formatted, displays well thought out ideas and is an application of high quality. The Map change event could have some more improvements in terms of defined objectives and points, but you dont know how map changes work and haven't done one- nor been on the server when one took place and as someone who struggled with this in her application I can entirely sympathise.

I like the way you've brought genuinely loved stories of SCP to mini-events, specificially the well known Overlord story.

I wish you the best of luck.
 
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-Application is excellent, fantastic formatting and detail
-Positive attitude
-Roleplay is high quality and has hosted in character situations to enhance roleplay


Only negative is the map change event idea however I do not feel this is enough to bring down the application as a whole + this can be improved on in the future.
 
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