[US] Marlowe's Captain Application

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Bingobak

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Steam ID:
STEAM_0:1:530916421

Discord name:
Puppet Master#7793

For how long have you played on CG SCP:
295 hours

Age:
20

In what country are you located?:
United States

Time zone:
CST But I am more active during the night time

Character name(s):
Marlowe Cain

Civilian name:
Marlowe Frusian

What server are you applying for? (SCP-RP UK or SCP-RP USA):
SCP-RP USA

Do you have a mic?:
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Yes

List all whitelisted, MTF, or CI roles that you hold or have held:
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RRT and Heavy.

Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?:
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I have not Received any Kicks, Bans, or warnings.

Why are you applying for Security Captain?
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I am applying for the position of Security Captain because I wish to Be able to attempt to increase the quality of the General Security Department. I also wish to attempt to increase the number of riot officers that the General Security Department has Due to the comparatively low numbers of RRT officers that Gensec has compared to the Sergeants.

What makes you suitable for Security Captain?:
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I am able to act as A Stabilizing Force for the D block. I am able to be on when little to no captains are on which allows Gensec to have a CL4 on who is able to call sweeps when the D class start acting up late at night. I have been A riot Sergeant for the vast majority of my hours so I should be able to take the leap and become a captain

What are the responsibilities of the Security Captain in RP?:
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The Responsibilities of a Security Captain are as follows​
  1. Managing the General Security Department​
  2. Managing D Block and making sure that Research Can proceed Smoothly.​
  3. Punish misbehaving members of the General Security Department and reward those who do good.​
  4. Hold Tryouts for Riot and Heavy Licensee​
  5. Managing RRT and posting them At places as requirewd​
Please give some lore about your Security Captain character and what storylines they would be involved in:


Personnel File: Marlowe Cain

Rank: Riot Sergeant


Marlowe Cain was a Police Officer in the town of [REDACTED] North Dakota. He was investigating a missing person case with three other officers when he encountered an instance of SCP-6448
One of the Officers perished after triggering SCP-6448 The partner of that Officer subsequently is believed to have perished when he opened fire on SCP-6448.
Officer Cain and his partner Officer [REDACTED] came upon SCP-6448 while investigating a cabin close to the two missing Officers.
Officer [REDACTED] ended up triggering SCP-6448.
While his partner was killed Officer Cain Was able to barricade himself in the nearby cabin So that when SCP-6448 Attempted to eliminate him he was able to terminate it but in the process lost his radio.
Officer Marlowe was recruited into the General Security Department due to the good work he has shown as an officer of the law and his ability to survive against SCP-6448. This incident was blamed on wildlife and amnestic's were administered as needed.]
 
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Bingobak

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Seems rushed on this and RRT And heavy is meh I would try to join an mtf regiment like nu-7 to help with experience

Edit reading back over it try fixing some spelling mistakes :)
Thank you for the feedback, as for your criticisms:
1. The seeming rush that you perceive is because im terrible at writing apps I spent about quite abit of time on this.
2. I Do not have any interest in joining MTF at this time.
Again, thank you for taking the time to read through my app and respond
 
Thank you for the feedback, as for your criticisms:
1. The seeming rush that you perceive is because im terrible at writing apps I spent about quite abit of time on this.
2. I Do not have any interest in joining MTF at this time.
Again, thank you for taking the time to read through my app and respond
I feel u on that
I would read some others (dont copy) and borrow from them like other captian apps if u can find some accepted ones I'm currently making mine and I'm stumped on making a story
 

Bingobak

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Application is missing parts and looks rushed
Lack of experience in other fields of work such as MTF/IA/Intel etc just shows me that you do not have a lot of experience on site and have not taken the time to expand your horizons to make well informed decisions.
1. What parts of my application are missing?
2. While that is sound in theory I do not have interest in Being MTF/IA/INTEL, and as for experience what is the number of hours I should aim for?
 
1. What parts of my application are missing?
2. While that is sound in theory I do not have interest in Being MTF/IA/INTEL, and as for experience what is the number of hours I should aim for?
1. What parts of my application are missing?
2. While that is sound in theory I do not have interest in Being MTF/IA/INTEL, and as for experience what is the number of hours I should aim for?
hours and experience are diffrent
afk for 36 hours does that mean i have alot of experience, no Joining MTF intel and IA gives u that experience and more site knowledge
 

"Nexus One"

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Hello there,
This is Dpt. Chief "Nexus One" and I want to thank you for applying for this position.
I regret to inform you after your application has been Denied. As we do not feel that you are not currently ready for the position, you may re-apply in two weeks. We would like to see you have more experience in leading sweeps and managing GENSEC and also, we would like to see more effort on your application.

From the desk of Dpt. Chief "Nexus One" and Dpt. Chief J P Bingus
 
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