I'm from the UK server but I wanted to point out a couple things, you've mentioned that you copied this application from one of your older ones which is fine but to some extent however you have copied the entire application with little to no change, the changes that you've made is the addition of:
"One thing that was of previous concern for myself was my lack of playtime recently on the server, these were of course valid concerns, though I wish to put your mind at ease in telling you that my Vtime has been improving drastically as has my time within the ISD. Within the past week alone I have put in over a day an 9 hours of active play time, which is a lot given my schedule."
In my personal opinion I would recommend to explaining in detail what you have done differently since your latest application. Detail on what you've improved on in regards to the feedback recieved on the denied application.