[USA] Internal Affairs Ambassador Application

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Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:516672269
Discord name: omegagamer_10#7771
For how long have you played on CG SCP: About since september 2022
Age: 15 (05/July/2007)
In what country are you located?: Netherlands
Time zone: GMT+1
Character name(s): Billy "Villager" Bob
Civilian name: Billy "Villager" Bob
What server are you applying for? (SCP-RP UK or SCP-RP USA):
Do you have a mic?:
-Yes
List all whitelisted, MTF, or CI roles that you hold or have held:
-No
Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?:
-No
Why are you applying for Internal Affairs Ambassador?
-Because I want to help other IA members while on the job and get more into the department.
What makes you suitable for Internal Affairs Ambassador?:
-I do not abuse my power.
-I make sure I hear everyone's story of an incident and do not take action without valid proof.
-If I do not know something I always ask before doing it to other members that do know.
How many documents have you written? What makes a document good?:
-2 (Will do more(I forgot to write arrest reports before so thats why so little amount))
-It must have good detail to what happened.
-It must have the year number redacted. (Do not know if it is required for everything)
-It must be normally formatted and not a mess.
What are the responsibilities of the Internal Affairs Ambassador in RP?:
-Making sure IA members do not falsly arrest anyone or break rules themself
Please give some lore about your Internal Affairs Ambassador character and what storylines they would be involved in:
Billy "Villager" Bob is an IA ambassador and has been for the last 5 years. When he became IA he instantly started to do good for the foundation and has arrested a lot of ethics violaters that ranged from killing d classes unethicly to misuse of a scp. After he got the ambassador job he started to arrest a lot more violaters of the rules. Billy was a former marine soldier but got discharged because of having committed murder but it was not his fault as it was a case of crossfire. In the marine corps he had gotten the rank of Sergeant Major. After being discharged he had gotten a letter from a highly confidential organization. At that time Billy did not know anything about it until a truck of agents came to pick him up at his house and took him to the foundation.

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I will keep trying to apply if I fail until I get the job. Ofcourse not spamming it but waiting like a week and then retrying.
 

TheBigOneEye

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The Application seems to be rather low effort, and you forgot to answer some of the questions.
Which Server are you applying for? You didn't say in the Application.
As a Current Ambassador, I have not seen you, if you don't Play on UK that might explain it.
I would like to see more effort than one or two sentences on most of your questions.
Lore could be expanded on a bit more.
 

DonkeyKong

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What server are u even applying for.
How do u expect to get ambassador with minimum effort put in and not even answering questions
 
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- Low play-time
- Poor application, hardly answered anything. I just suspect this as an minge application.
- No interactions, never seen you on site.
- Not much CL3 experience.
- Application not fully filled out.
- No documents completed.

Here's some constructive criticism, if you want people to support your application make an effort at completing it in the first place and having some kind of reputation.
 
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I am sorry that I forgot to specify which server.
What questions did I forget to fill out because I have filled out every question on the format.
While I can tell people have been.. harsh. I think the main reason people say it's low effort is because you have made no effort to try and make it more readable; You are allow to stylize & color your application.

Additionally, you can edit it & specify which server you're applying for. I know a few people stated this, but you'll also wanna be relatively well known or at the very least active in the community you're applying for.

I hope you end up reviewing your application & finding things to improve on it, but right now I think just generally more playtime & interactions would send you a long way.

Best of luck!!!
 

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I must say the UK IA Ambassador team has just ripped your USA IA Ambassador application appart by complete accident as we believed you were applying for the UK server.

Having said that, their points revolving the application do stand however any notes on interactions and activity must be discarded due to you playing on the other server.

However a way to make your application easier to read may be by putting a single or double line gap between a new question and the previous answer. An example:

Name:
James 'Critical' Krane.

Age:
16.

Good luck with your application and I hope the USA IA team get back to you and not the UK IA team!
 

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Your application to the Internal Affairs Ambassador team has been rejected, Myself, Rummer, and the ambassador team feels that as you are currently you are not fit to be an ambassador. If you would like an in-depth explanation contact me.
Feel free to apply again in 2 weeks​
 
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