Lice Cookers Gamemaster Application

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Dom Neale

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Original Steam login name (your accounts first ever name): dom1gamer21
For how long have you played on CG MRP: Around 1 year and 2 months
Age: 14 (played for 1 year)
In what country are you located?: UK
Time zone: GMT
NATO name (regiment and rank): RMP 2LT Lice Cooker
USSR name (regiment and rank): 10TH PVT Mice Cooker
Civilian name: Mr Cooker
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:577263925
Do you have a mic?: yes
Is this the first application you made? If no, link all previous applications:
-Yes this is my first application
Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?:
- Yes- i got warned for fail rp because i pressed my panic button a second after this PC stripped me without noticing, my second failrp was because i through a smoke grenade down at a bad time, I got 2 more fail RP's but one was in November and another in January but cannot remember what exactly what happened, i also got kicked for being AFK and a warn for stuck abusing which i have no excuse for !
Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community?:
- Yes but for only 2 weeks, my friend set up a server for the first time and i was in charge of coming up with different types of events but i left just before i joined CG.
Do you have any previous experience with serious roleplay?:
- Yes i was in a German 1942 WW2 serious RP for around a month but was not the biggest fan of it but i put up with it.
How many hours can you be on everyday?:
- Depending on if i have school or not if i am on a holiday then i say around 4-10 hours but if i have school then around 2-4 hours
Why do you want to become a Gamemaster on our server?:
- Well i have always been the creative kind and have seen many different aspects of many different events take place in previous servers and like i said i have a very creative mind meaning i can make many events unique for the beneficial purposes of this perfect community that i am lucky enough to be apart off. Being in this server for quite a while now, it has always been my motive from day 1 to make a difference to server and i believe Game Master is the perfect position for me to do so and put my thoughts towards the better. Being granted this position would be an honour and most of all a privilege for myself.
What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants?: As i mentioned in the previous answer i have seen many different aspects and sides of many events and with my unique touch i am capable to put together an event that the public will sure enjoy and not only that me being just a normal member to the community i have also gotten a deep inside for a very long time on what people would love in events and what some would not want in events and not only that but also features which i most definitely take on board all the time !
Please List 3 small event ideas (Which would involve at least one side of the server):
1. It has come to the attention of NATO that USSR are holding documents under high security, these documents include a series of important information that could benefit NATO in many ways including the location of where USSR outposts are scattered across AFGHAN, It is NATO's duty to retrieve these documents for the brighter future of war and not only that but America! 2. There have been reports off the public of Afghanistan of USSR and the Private Army making negotiations in a secure part of settlement.. The reports have stated that these negotiations put NATO under great threat towards the near future, it is NATO's responsibility to make sure both Army's do not sign the contract or NATO will be forever doomed !
3. NATO have seized a Coded message that the USSR have been transmitting to extremely far away USSR outposts of a possible assassination attempt against one of the NHC, we do not know how many HC have been put on the KOS list for this assassination attempt or even who but all we do know there will be a possible base invasion of the Russians, we must stay at high alert at all costs or else this could end catastrophically with one or more of our NHC dead!


Please List an Map change event idea (Involving both sides and the entire server)

Previously NATO beat USSR to the nuke codes in Siberia and USSR have come up with a master plan to retrieve them... The Private Army has declared that they are now officially an Independent Army and confusingly declared war on both USSR and NATO, USSR offered to form a very short alliance with NATO as the Private Army have increased in numbers through out the last few years and will most certainly over power either NATO or USSR maybe even both! NATO and USSR fend off the private army in a battle in Afghan, NATO proposed a peace conference with the entire of USSR but is shortly ended with NATO realising USSR stole the nuke codes of NATO while they where out of their prime.. NATO now once again declaring war on USSR they follow the Russians to a deserted part of EAST EUROPE (New Map on teasers) , once then NATO realising that USSR had paid the private army to declare war on both Army's including USSR to make it seem realistic but purposefully lost the battle.

List an example mission for each pair of regiments:
MP/KGB: An extremely deadly war criminal has escaped from the grasps of NATO ROYAL MILITARY POLICE ! This man is a great threat to NATO during war and we believe that USSR's plan is to recruit this man into the Russian army which will be extremely catastrophic, he is casting away from any one and everyone which seems to be somewhere in East Town, KGB have been ordered to retrieve this man.. RMP cannot let this happen at all costs!! Retrieving this man into keeping of NATO will put all Afghan citizens to ease knowing they are safe in their own home town!

SAS/AG: After many suspicions NATO have done some extreme investigating into a project called DARK CLOUD and turns out it is an extreme payload (bomb) strapped on the top floor of a possible Mosque under construction, NATO have found out that the USSR regiment running this operation is the most feared of them all amongst the other USSR regiments.... USSR ALFA GROUP most commonly know as AG. SAS have been assigned to infiltrate this weapon of mass destruction (bomb) and clear out the USSR and any other possible threats, there is a 30 minute timer on the bomb, SAS must at all cost defuse the bomb !

SHA & ISAF: An important USSR messenger has been sent by a small Russian outpost to give Vladmir Putin extremely important info on cut off NATO war plans which NATO are in dire need of, he was last located in Village heading towards bunker with the transport of USSR SHOCK ARMY TROOPS in an extreme convoy, it is ISAF's mission to hijack and retrieve this USSR messenger at all costs and fend off any enemy USSR and successfully RTB with this messenger without a scratch on him ! Once in the hands of NATO he will be excessively tortured and interrogated.

JAF & ABT: There have been reports of a planned attack against NATO'S supply bunker which holds many different items which are in great needs for NATO and especially JAF as many supplies that are needed for their helicopters, tanks, trucks and many armoured vehicles, it is most likely under great threat... It is JAF's mission to intercept USSR ABT enemy air crafts before their unload extreme fire power amongst NATO's bunker.

10th & 17th: In top secret documents it states that USSR 10TH STEEL DEVISION are going to start an operation called SILVER WOOD. NATO used extreme message interceptors to figure out more about this operation. After some research it has come to GRMS Falcon's attention that 10TH STEEL DEVISION are doing an extreme operation of transporting next generation tank blueprints which will most surely overpower all NATO 17TH'S TANK REGIMENTS'S weapons and tanks, there is only one copy of this blue print hence such high security, NATO have located the negotiation with USSR and German engineers which will take place in Air field, it is 17TH'S mission and responsibility to retrieve these blueprints and insure they return back to base in one piece for the greater of NATO in battle !
 
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Michiel-MV

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+/-Neutral (subject to change)
- Says that he is 14 years old but you can only apply when you are 15(only if you have perms from SA) I don't know if you have asked permision to apply but if you did add it on your application
+Mature = I rember you from back in the day when you were in 17th(17th SGT Dom Neal:oops:). You had an decent maturity back in the day.
+Good application but a bit croped up so it can be annoying to read sometimes


Small events

+/- 1st small event = This event sounds to me like the basic gm filler event where you have documents hidden with some lore and one side defends for an certain amount of time. I do believe these events are fun but there basic.
2nd small event(leaning +sup) = This event sounds cool cause you can put alot of RP into it the only thing that i find it a bit off is that you put TPA in the event TPA is good for events yeeees but putting it on your app is not really to original. I rather see a bit more originality in lore.
3de small event = This event sounds fun it reminds me of a bit of that little contract you can do in GTA like headhunter where you get targets and need to kill them its sounds cool i would love to see more like hitman type events.
Overall in small events i will give you a neutral

Map change event

Lore: I like the lore but again with adding TPA in your lore i find it a bit unoriginal. But the rest of the lore sounds decent to good imo
Fun: it sounds fun
Detail: Kinda lack of detail on like what the map(steamworkshopmaplink) is. I don't really see an very clear objective cause it kinda sounds to me like an sequel of an past event.
Overal: Neutral

Regimental missions

RMP/FSB = This sounds like a very cool idea. Like a guy that is wanted and the USSR wants to recruit him sounds like a cool idea for a reg mission this is some good lore.

SAS/AG = Sounds like a fun event but it will be hard to do the only flaws that I have with this is event is 30 minutes to defuse cause its pretty long imo and people don't really like events that take ages to end but i will still +sup this mission cause the idea is cool


SHA/ISAF = This event sounds decent I like convoy events there fun but I don't like the lore it just sounds to me like an basic escort putin mission.

JAF/ABT = This event sounds very one sided imo like JAF needs to shoot down ABT sup helis and ABT will prob have 1 life with each supply heli. This just sounds fun for JAF but not fun for ABT. But one thing that almost every GM can agree on is that it is hard to make an good JAF/ABT event. Also i don't really see intresting or good lore here in this event

17thAR/10thSD = This event sounds mediocre to decent depends how the RP is gonna be. Its also sounds like a epic battle for the top secret documents. Also the lore of this event is meh imo

Overall = Neutral
leaning to + sup for regimental missions

Hello Lice cooker. Iam going to give you an neutral all reasons stated above.

Good luck (y)
 

Dom Neale

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+/-Neutral (subject to change)
- Says that he is 14 years old but you can only apply when you are 15(only if you have perms from SA) I don't know if you have asked permision to apply but if you did add it on your application
+Mature = I rember you from back in the day when you were in 17th(17th SGT Dom Neal:oops:). You had an decent maturity back in the day.
+Good application but a bit croped up so it can be annoying to read sometimes


Small events

+/- 1st small event = This event sounds to me like the basic gm filler event where you have documents hidden with some lore and one side defends for an certain amount of time. I do believe these events are fun but there basic.
2nd small event(leaning +sup) = This event sounds cool cause you can put alot of RP into it the only thing that i find it a bit off is that you put TPA in the event TPA is good for events yeeees but putting it on your app is not really to original. I rather see a bit more originality in lore.
3de small event = This event sounds fun it reminds me of a bit of that little contract you can do in GTA like headhunter where you get targets and need to kill them its sounds cool i would love to see more like hitman type events.
Overall in small events i will give you a neutral

Map change event

Lore: I like the lore but again with adding TPA in your lore i find it a bit unoriginal. But the rest of the lore sounds decent to good imo
Fun: it sounds fun
Detail: Kinda lack of detail on like what the map(steamworkshopmaplink) is. I don't really see an very clear objective cause it kinda sounds to me like an sequel of an past event.
Overal: Neutral

Regimental missions

RMP/FSB = This sounds like a very cool idea. Like a guy that is wanted and the USSR wants to recruit him sounds like a cool idea for a reg mission this is some good lore.

SAS/AG = Sounds like a fun event but it will be hard to do the only flaws that I have with this is event is 30 minutes to defuse cause its pretty long imo and people don't really like events that take ages to end but i will still +sup this mission cause the idea is cool


SHA/ISAF = This event sounds decent I like convoy events there fun but I don't like the lore it just sounds to me like an basic escort putin mission.

JAF/ABT = This event sounds very one sided imo like JAF needs to shoot down ABT sup helis and ABT will prob have 1 life with each supply heli. This just sounds fun for JAF but not fun for ABT. But one thing that almost every GM can agree on is that it is hard to make an good JAF/ABT event. Also i don't really see intresting or good lore here in this event

17thAR/10thSD = This event sounds mediocre to decent depends how the RP is gonna be. Its also sounds like a epic battle for the top secret documents. Also the lore of this event is meh imo

Overall = Neutral
leaning to + sup for regimental missions

Hello Lice cooker. Iam going to give you an neutral all reasons stated above.

Good luck (y)
Hiya Michiel long time no see! Totally understandable with the JAF/ABT event, like you said it can be hard for regiments like this but there are still some events that can be thought of, overall thank you for the feed back!! XD
 

Kamil

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+-neutral, willing to give a chance
I'm not going to make this too long but a lot of the events are very basic and done multiple times, and I'm pretty sure your main event has already been done as well.

I understand how difficult it can be to make regimental events so those are alright but it's mostly your small events and main event that lack anything that stands out.

I am willing to change my verdict if you added to your events with less... you know,
woah secret code woah secret nukes woah secret blueprint for a secret tank in a secret bunker in a secret outpost in a secret location that NATO just happened to get info for

sorry if that sounds a little toxic but I do personally feel like using those kinds of tropes are unoriginal, boring, lazy and overall numbs down the importance of something that should be on that large a scale. Even having like a testing vehicle break down during testing is a lot better than those.

However, you have a good reputation and these aren't things that can be easily changed and worked on. If anything, the amount of effort you put in the app and the ideas are there it's just those little tweaks to make things better.

I hope you take this feedback to mind and hopefully tune your app a bit so I can give you the +

Good luck!
 
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Jontesvall

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IKEA land

+Support (Towards +Neutral)

+Mature - I seen you ingame and i feel like i know you
+Active - Seen you a lot ingame
+Good application - Seem like you put in a lot of effort into it

+/-Age - A bit young but i do belive you can do it
+/-Some event's can be worked on a bit more with story =)
 

Dom Neale

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Feb 1, 2021
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-support
I'm not going to make this too long but a lot of the events are very basic and done multiple times, and I'm pretty sure your main event has already been done as well.

I understand how difficult it can be to make regimental events so those are alright but it's mostly your small events and main event that lack anything that stands out.

I am willing to change my verdict if you added to your events with less... you know,
woah secret code woah secret nukes woah secret blueprint for a secret tank in a secret bunker in a secret outpost in a secret location that NATO just happened to get info for

sorry if that sounds a little toxic but I do personally feel like using those kinds of tropes are unoriginal, boring, lazy and overall numbs down the importance of something that should be on that large a scale. Even having like a testing vehicle break down during testing is a lot better than those.

I hope you take this feedback to mind and hopefully tune your app a bit so I can give you the +

Good luck!
Definitely will take into account following on with some of my event skills thank you for feedback, much appreciated!
 

Beskar

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+Support

-Few Interactions
-Friendly
-Decent Idea’s

Best of luck
 
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sahns

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Hi Lice Cooker, I will go with Neutral today because of the following reasons,

You event ideas are decent, but the ideas are mostly to prove that you can implement good ideas if you get the role, so they will most likely always be changed if used.

I have seen that you are active although I have had no interactions with you.

I won't be surprised if you get accepted, but thats up to Senior Staff.

Best of luck.
 
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Kamil

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Definitely will take into account following on with some of my event skills thank you for feedback, much appreciated!
after some consideration. I changed the verdict, hope to see you on the GM team!
 

Jeff Carson

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+Support
+Good app.
+/- Few interactions but when I have they have been good.
+Seem mature when I have spoken to you.
 

Kenan

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+Support leaning to +/- Neutral
+Decent role-player
+Good application
+Dedicated
+Mature

+/-Lack of Interaction
-Events seem like they need more thought
-Age


Best of luck man hope you get your role
 
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