Michiel GM application

[Michiel Hoofbabski]

Original Steam login name (your accounts first ever name):Crazym36

For how long have you played on CG MRP: 06/11/2020

Age: 16

In what country are you located?: Belguim

Time zone: CET

In-game name and Previous Names: Michiel v and I changed it to just Michiel

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:139613847

Do you have a mic?: Yes

Is this the first application you made? If no, link all previous applications: No this will be my first application.

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Have you received any kicks/bans/warning? and why?: I got a warning for fail RP I was sorta new and didn’t really know a the kidnap rules so just killed my self which a nade and I don’t rember if I have 2nd warning but I don’t think so.



Do you have any previous experience as a Gamemaster/Event Manager in a community?: No this will be my first time



Do you have any previous experience with serious roleplay?: This MRP server is the first MRP server that I like and play serious for the rest I don’t have.

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How many hours can you be on everyday?: in weekdays(school) 1 to 3 hours weekdays(vacation) that can be 2 to 6 hours. Saturday 2 to 6 hours and Sunday 1 to 4 hours

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Why do you want to become a Gamemaster on our server?: I want to do something good for the community and make some fun events that make the people enjoy the server and that they keep coming back to the server.

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What do you think you would be able to help us with on the server? Why are you special over the other applicants?: I’m a creative person when I think of something fun I would try to make it happen I don’t want to give up on a project that could potentially be a very fun event that the community would like.

I would love to help the server and the communty which more events to provide more content in the server that you're not always doing the same thing in peacetime.



Please List 5 small event ideas(Which wouldn't require a map change):



Strange cheese: NATO and USSR have gotten a wierd type of cheese that makes people sick when they eat they turn into a zombie and there is a scientist that NATO and USSR need for a vaccine. in west town is militia is protecting the scientist. NATO and USSR are trying to get the scientist to there base so the scientist can make a vaccine.



Putin visits the USSR base: Putin visits the USSR base which his pet bear and drinks vodka which UCH. While Putin is visiting NATO is waiting outside the base. NATO is trying to kidnap Puttin and trying to excute him. USSR needs to defend putin at all cost.



Civilians protest: The civilians are not having it how NATO and USSR are treating them like they don’t exist. Civilians are going to raid the NATO and USSR base and try to takeover the two bases. They get supplied by Militia to raid the two basses.



CG MRP Afghan race: This is a race around afghan where 1 member of each regiment gets chosen by there regimental command where they compete in the big race around afghan where they can win prices 1st place gets 100k ingame cash, 2nd place gets 45k ingame cash and third place gets 20K ingame cash. This race is a can be a 6 or 10 lap race.



MRE stock got delayed: NATO and USSR noticed there MRE stock didn’t came today. Miltia and PC announced they killed the cook and got all the MRE stock. NATO and USSR need to steal the MRE stock truck from Militia and PC. The faction that got the supply truck get a full stock of MRE’s.



Queens gambit: A big chess tournament that will have 1 person of each regiment that will show his chess skills

Rewards: 1st place 75k, 2nd place 30k and third place 10k



CG MRP standup comedy show: This is a show where people can come on stage and tell some jokes where the public will put in chat how much the joke is out of 10. The winner which the highest score will get 20k.



















Please List 2 Big Event Ideas(Which would be what we call (Map Change Events):


Operation briefcase: NATO stole a briefcase full of information of USSR. USSR needs to get the briefcase back. NATO have 20 min to prepare to defend the base and USSR have 20 min to prepare for a attack on the NATO base.



How will this work? This will work like CTF when a USSR member takes the briefcase he needs to run to the USSR base but if he dies he drops the briefcase and NATO can retrieve the briefcase back to the base. If USSR gets the briefcase back to there base NATO gets a chance to do a base raid on USSR base to try to steal it back.

How many players will you need? Min 30 each side



Map: Highlands



Operation Moscow: USSR found documents that are located in Moscow. NATO got informed by a spy that they are going to Moscow for those documents. NATO and USSR are going to Moscow to get those documents that are defended by a unknow org(eternal few). They will have to search the building where the documents are located at first. Than USSR and NATO are going to fight against to eachtor and the unkown org. They will not find the document but they will find a man that has them in their pocket they will have to escort him back to their own camp.



How will this work? USSR and NATO spawn in Moscow and are going to find the location of the documents and then they find the man that hast the documents and they will escort him back to their camp so they can get him in a heli to go back to afghan.

How many players does it need: min 30 each side

Map: Moscow







What missions would you make for each regiment in Nato(SAS,MP,17th,JAF,ISAF) please list 1 mission per regiment:



SAS: will do a rescue mission on Crossen. USSR is having crossen held hostage in west town. SAS will try to save Crossen and let him get safe back to base.

MP: MP has heard information of a civ stealing a NATO vehicle. MP will need to find the civilian’s home. The civ’s home is protected by militia and PC. MP needs to capture the car thief and retrieve the vehicle in good shape back to the NATO base.



17th: 17th got an tank stollen by an unkown org(eternal few) they will have to search for information where there tank is located. 17th will have to retrieve and find the tank and get it back in good shape.



JAF: JAF where doing patrols and the engine of the helicopter stopped working so they have to the an emergency landing. They landed in west town. West town is claimed by militia. Militia is not happy that JAF is here. JAF needs to hold of the militia and defend the helicopter and repair it and needs to retrieve it back in good shape.



ISAF: ISAF is send on a mission to town to get a scientist for information but USSR is defending town. ISAF needs to get the scientist and get him back to base in good shape.





What missions would you make for each regiment in

USSR(AG,KGB,10TH,ABT,SHA) please list 1 mission per regiment:



AG: AG is going to breach in the border bunker to kidnap a NATO CO for information.
This NATO CO is getting defended by NATO units. AG needs to clear the Border Bunker and kidnap the NATO CO and get him to the USSR base.



KGB: There are NATO spies in the base and KGB needs to find who the spies are and they will need to capture the spies before they steal tanks or heli's and leak any information.



10TH: 10TH will be looking for a person that has blueprints of the unknow org(eternal few). 10TH needs to find the person and escort him back to base.



ABT: ABT are going to paradrop into airfield and free a hostage from NATO
ABT needs to get hostage back in good shape.



SHA: SHA were patrolling and they heard a big explosion close to settlement and they went to investigate and they see Militia is blowing up settlement. SHA needs to clear militia from settlement and defend settlement.

Thanks for reading my application

 

[Bobby1]

+Support​

+active in-game and ts3
+Mature player who rarely minges
+Put 7 small events but the more the merrier
+Small events are strong
+I like the regimental events except for kgbs
+The idea for the Moscow event is cool IMO
-Big events could be better(I'll explain why now)
Your big event one is just a base raid back on highlands which has been done not so recently when we were still on highlands.

Map: Moscow

You didn't really give us a map for Moscow. I'd recommend doing a bit of research on maps to see if the event would work beforehand.

KGB: There are NATO spies in the base and KGB needs to find who the spies are and they will need to capture the spies before they steal tanks or heli's and leak any information.

- Your kgb event is basically what kgb does during peacetime. So I would change that if I were you.

Best of luck I hope to see you doing events soon

 

[Flextern]

+Support
+ Great ideas
+ Active ingame and TS
+ Mature

 

[Bogdan]

-Support
My opinion of gamemaster applications is that their actual skill of running events and RP is under the scope, I don't think I've interacted with you much in game so I can't really comment on how well your RP is, but below is a detailed rundown on my opinion of your application events: red being bad, orange being neutral and green being positive. An application is putting your best foot forward, and in this case I don't think you have.
- Small Events:

~ Strange Cheese:​

The premise of a disease event is something I do like, that being said the way you've described it is most definitely not ideal for a game master event in terms of RP.​

~ Putin:​

This event concept isn't particularly original, that being said I don't see any glaring issues with it, this being a game master application it doesn't "wow" me.​

~ Civi protest:​

Same issue with the putin event, it doesn't seem particularly original: I strongly believe applications are putting your best foot forward and in this case I really don't think you are.​

- Afgan car Race​

DarkRP event on MRP gamemaster application, again these events are to put your best foot forwards, running these events is fine however we expect more than this.​

~ Civi protest:​

I like the premise of stealing supply trucks from militia.​

- Chess tournament​

- Big Events:

- Briefcase​

Not a map change event.​

~ Moscow​

Not enough information, this event also sounds like it'll have one side waiting for 30 minutes while the other fights and then again vice versa?​

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For the regimental events I'll comment on the ones I particularly like or dislike, otherwise it'll be neutral or positive.

MP: MP has heard information of a civ stealing a NATO vehicle. MP will need to find the civilian’s home. The civ’s home is protected by militia and PC. MP needs to capture the car thief and retrieve the vehicle in good shape back to the NATO base.

+ I really like this concept actually.

17th: 17th got an tank stollen by an unkown org(eternal few) they will have to search for information where there tank is located. 17th will have to retrieve and find the tank and get it back in good shape.

- This seems like the MP one, I like it less: you seem to overly rely on the eternal few: they should barely ever be used for events.

KGB: There are NATO spies in the base and KGB needs to find who the spies are and they will need to capture the spies before they steal tanks or heli's and leak any information.

- Losing things because of a gamemaster event is a feelsbadman, I don't recommend doing this.

10TH: 10TH will be looking for a person that has blueprints of the unknow org(eternal few). 10TH needs to find the person and escort him back to base.

- This doesn't really seem like something 10th would be sent to do.

Overall in your application you're overly reliant on the eternal few, and provide very few ideas that really make me go "wow", an application is putting your best foot forward, I can certainly see some talent here especially in regards to the MP event, however I don't think the rest of the events would be of a high quality.

 

[Risky]

-Support (Subject to change)

Before I give my honest opinion let's start with the good things about your GM app. First of all, you're active in-game and in Teamspeak, for the moment that is really all I can think of.

Now it's time to pick into your application and explain my verdict. I'm not sure if English is your first language or not, seeing how you're in Belgium, but there are many Spelling mistakes and grammatical errors within this application. Grammarly is a free-to-use chrome extension that I heavily recommend to anyone including yourself to use when writing an application of any kind on here since it will help you sound clear and help you notice if you had any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors in your app.

Ok without further of due now into the actual app itself. Your small event ideas seem more suited for DarkRP than MilitaryRP, how would a "Cheese touch event" or an "MRE stocks getting delayed" have any RP (genuine question)? The "Operation Briefcase" event is just a different game mode of vwar which you didn't give enough lore for it besides "NATO has a briefcase, USSR want, NATO no let USSR have briefcase".

Your missions that would be "appointed" to regiments are very basic, a good example of a basic one is "ABT would paradrop to save a hostage from NATO".

In conclusion, you have many grammar mistakes and most of the event ideas are basic. I suggest you give more lore for your big event (Operation briefcase). For your small events make more MRP-related events instead of a simple event. Then lastly for your missions for each regiment go more into depth and not just put an extremely basic mission idea for their missions.

Good Luck...

P.S. Don't feel bad this is coming from the guy who is still asking for a Starwars event...

Green=Good
Yellow/Orange= Ok/Can be fixed on
Red=Bad

 

[Kiwi]

Neutral.
+Active IG & TS.
+Mature (from what I've seen).
+Application is decently made (with the exception of the grammar).
/ Unsure on rule knowledge.
-Events are basic ideas
-Many grammatical errors within your application.

Overall, I haven't had many interactions with you in game, this isn't a bad thing at all, so i don't know what your rule knowledge is like as well as your RP. Best of luck with your application,
Kiwi.

 

[Falcon]

Denied

You seem to have left a negative impact on players in the community which is not what we look for in a game master, you may re-apply in 2 weeks.​